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the sound of crickets...

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

There are times when life unfolds in unexpected ways. You decide how it ends. Flash-Fiction in a poetiprose format.

Friday, August 16, 2019


Poem Artwork
With a loud
clanking clamor, the
vehicle rolled to a stop; a
pungent reek of burnt metal
hung in the air.
Angrily,
he jumped
out, slammed the
door, and paced a while…
Some males lose their cool
when they don’t feel in control.
Now, his sensible self began splintering.
For a while his mind was like a lump of death;
a chaos of clay hardening in the paralyzing grips
of circumstance. The dark night was devouring him;
he was stranded smackdab in the middle of nowhere,
with no way to communicate.
.
“Damn cellphone battery,” he hissed, “what now?”
.
Broodingly,
he observed, in a
long sweeping gaze,
the muzzy silhouette
of a lone
cottage in the distance…
.
‘Maybe I could get help there.’
His thoughts quickened.
Locking his vehicle, he strode off.
.
As he neared,
an upstairs shade
was lifted suddenly, and
a warm splash of golden light
spilled out into a charcoal night…
.
As if by magic,
a woman appeared in a
gilded-glow of candlelight.
Unreserved
in her manner;
she drifted across
the man’s senses as a
musky persuasion moistened
him in a swirl of seduction…
.
Utterly, his
mind yielded
to the rage of her,
and like a phantom
he maneuvered nearer…
.
‘Neath the open window
(and being concealed now in the
shadows of a sprawling Black Walnut)
he gazed up at a moist body
radiant in pastel hues,
wet strands of hair
hanging limply,
droplets of water,
like brooding adamants,
glistening at hairs end,
and then…,
plummeting down silently
towards a darkened cleavage.
.
Carefully, she patted dry the
water beading on her velvet flesh.
Toweling softly her shoulders and breasts,
she moved down her
T
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O
.
H
I
P
S
.
T
H
I
G
H
S
.
“Where are you my darling?” He heard her whisper as she moved from sight.
.
Decisively, he walked to the door and knocked. Around him, the sound of crickets intensified…
.
richard lloyd cederberg
8/19


     


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Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on August 24, 2019
You ended the story at the perfect spot. Anticipation intensified like the sound of the crickets.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 19, 2019
WOW, RICHARD, WHAT A GREAT STORY...OPENER! I LOVED IT, WRITTEN SO WELL, WITH SO MUCH MORE TO COME. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS +INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 18, 2019
Now, that is a wet dream if I ever read one. He's angry. She's angry. What is to come up that? His mind was softened to the "rage" of her. Or was he angry that he was having to observe her seductive manner? Some questions were left in my mind. Even though this was so superbly written. But then, I always find questions where I shouldn't and often misunderstand work.

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 17, 2019
I hope the crickets go quiet and you can expand this to the next chapter...you got me wanting to take a cold shower...-e-

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on August 16, 2019
OOOOH, how you leave me wanting to know "whats next"
A pen that knows how to dip me in all the right places. Thanks for the flash fiction Richard.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on August 16, 2019
Oh, Wow. The unexpected magic. The inner desire of contact taking on the visceral and survival tinge of credibility without explanation. My kind of wordsmithing, Richard. Kudos and Bravo.

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on August 16, 2019
Wow is all I can say! smile
ann

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 16, 2019
And, don't tell us we are left hanging, after that beautiful and seductive build up. Isn't life just like that. All fantasy and no reality.


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