Lew, love this one...you painted the image of a small child without any fear in the world... In a world of his own having fun...Getting old is a bummer sometimes...If we could only go back for a moment...
I enjoyed this poem because I have a little nephew that this describes to a T!
Lew, you have managed to capture the energy of that youth in your poem, and that is a great acomplishment.
The Fight Begins!
Retired! New start! Murder!
Todd, detective lieutenant, has retired from St. Louis, Missouri and has moved to Ford Valley, Arizona. When Todd’s ex-wife is killed in a car accident, Todd fights for custody of his teenage
Retired! New start! Murder!
Todd, detective lieutenant, has retired from St. Louis, Missouri and has moved to Ford Valley, Arizona. When Todd’s ex-wife is killed in a car accident, Todd fights for custody of his teenage daughter. She has bee
Lew, you have managed to capture the energy of that youth in your poem, and that is a great acomplishment.
a fellow poet, -Zach :)