He emerged eclipsed through tangle of November's bare branches a waning crescent suspended in a cloudless sky smiling back at her amid clusters of piggy-backed sparks constellation bright illuminating this kismet with his flirtateous wink.
She wanted him as wakefulness eluded her drifting into mid-night... and she wondered how would it feel to fall asleep beneath his mystery in heat of night's beam nestled in inviting curve his smiles against her neck arms draped as the branch in naked caress of twigs about her breasts protecting the woman he has blissfully wearied in this night's allure...
Graphic image and verses complement one another effectively to convey the intended emotions and meaning of your verses. Splendidly done, Taylor. Thank you. Love and peace,
dreamy, sensual mood here
this piece put me in a wonderful place
thanks a bunch
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Jeff Mason, Richard Cederberg and Alexandra have all independently spoken such undeniable truths here about you and your amazing talent. It is an incredible gift to possess this poetic ability of yours which we enjoy so much. I don't think I could possibly add anything to what these poets have already written here, except to say I eagerly await the next Taylor Ryan gem to appear and move my heart and mind to this magical place to which you take us all! Richard really nailed it when he said: "You are as inticing as a HOT fudge sunday!"
~Butch
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2006
Sensuous, emotive and mystical write Taylor, great imagery...as ever, loved much. Panda :)
Wow! Great job. This has a wonderfully sensual feel about it. You might like my "Dreamland" and "Alabaster Moon" poems. I write a lot about dreams and fantasy.
This is gorgeous poetry, subtly yet powerfully sensuous, with a masterful use of language and imagery. A warm, liquid "skin" of a poem, enveloping the reader's emotions which, simultaneously, flow with it. Magnificently done, Taylor, and a pleasure to read!
Love,
Alexandra*
No matter what you do, it seems to bless me. For six months now I have watched you nuture your ability and hone your art. And you have done it without silicone implants! You are growing, and your muse is taking you to places that no one else has gone. Kudos!
"To fall asleep beneath his mystery" is of course a quintessential and exemplary example of the profound romantic that you are. Nothing will ever interfere with your visions of love and what you envision for yourself.
And quite frankly, I would extol this profound coquettish sensuality that you possess if I was sure that it was really the ache of your heart and not just the muse leading you.
Supremely (!) romantic, and... dare I say that your poetry is addictive. You have such a verve about your meanderings that effortlessly draws the reader in, without his/her knowledge, a seamless segue directly into the core of the reader's soul. You are much more talented than you realize. Another mark of a great writer that you exhibit is that, with your writing, it always seems as if it is written personally to the reader - to me, that is an incredibly captivating trait. -- Jeff
protecting the woman he has blissfully wearied
in this night's allure...
... can't tell you what this does for me, Taylor. 'Cept it brings me to tears. Think you have tapped in to a very deep root with me, from my childhood, about seeing the limbs of trees as protective and swaddling... more evident at this time of year as they become strongly naked.... Funny, I have had something brewing on the tip of my tongue that flirts with similar ideas, but my Muse hasn't quite got it altogether yet...Not sure I want to even try after this poetic delight... I'll just bask here, thank you... :)) LOL K xx
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
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illustration. . .b e a u t i f u l !! Moonstruck :) <3:)
this piece put me in a wonderful place
thanks a bunch
~Butch
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Love,
Alexandra*
No matter what you do, it seems to bless me. For six months now I have watched you nuture your ability and hone your art. And you have done it without silicone implants! You are growing, and your muse is taking you to places that no one else has gone. Kudos!
"To fall asleep beneath his mystery" is of course a quintessential and exemplary example of the profound romantic that you are. Nothing will ever interfere with your visions of love and what you envision for yourself.
And quite frankly, I would extol this profound coquettish sensuality that you possess if I was sure that it was really the ache of your heart and not just the muse leading you.
You are as enticing as a hot fudge sundae.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Sp ... flirtatious
That Man in the Moon is never far away...
He keeps popping up every month...heh
Keep doing ...what you do do well...;-)
Love
Peter
ET
in this night's allure...
... can't tell you what this does for me, Taylor. 'Cept it brings me to tears. Think you have tapped in to a very deep root with me, from my childhood, about seeing the limbs of trees as protective and swaddling... more evident at this time of year as they become strongly naked.... Funny, I have had something brewing on the tip of my tongue that flirts with similar ideas, but my Muse hasn't quite got it altogether yet...Not sure I want to even try after this poetic delight... I'll just bask here, thank you... :)) LOL K xx
love,
Myrna
Love tinka
Love,
CJ
A pleasure to read.
Elizabeth