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Tracks in the Ash
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Footprints, 35,000 years old, in volcanic ash in Mexico.

Thank you, Susan, for the inspiration...


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Tracks in the Ash

Thirty-five thousand years ago,
they walked on this land.
And then they disappeared,
hard for the mind to understand.

For they were clearly human,
and they walked with ease.
Like lovers stroll at sunset,
and feel the onshore breeze.

Time has made the imprint,
forever cast in stone.
We were not the first to this place,
and we were not alone.

The key to our future,
may lie in our past.
Why some of us have prospered,
and why some of us have passed.

What was their life like?
A question hard to ask.
They left few clues behind them,
a monumental task.

But slowly we will piece together,
the mystery of their lives.
For our future depends upon it,
like bees depend on hives.

Copyright 2006 © Ronald W. Hull

9/9/06

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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 13, 2006
you make some excellent points in this well writtne poem ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 11, 2006
Ditto George!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
The future is what we, the present, make it. We are supposed to learn from the past, but have we? A cursory look at what is happening in our world (add those that are not reported) will show you what a mess we made of this world. Victor

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
The easiest details are the ones we ignore and yet they are the very ones we miss later in life.Every minute is a new minute and when it's gone...we can't go back. I wonder of the man who left the tracks and what his thoughts would be of man today and just how fast pace we run.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Makes me wonder what will be left behind in the future.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Excellent poem, but the thought that those footprints are 35,000 years old is even more intriguing. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
This one I liked alot, perhaps because of how well rhymed I found it to be or perhaps how much I respect the writer/poet...Ed

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Excellent thoughts here Ron. The poem presented an intriguing story and you resolved it with a wonderful simile.

And I agree, the key to understanding our future may lie in understanding our past and all the mistakes we made.

In fraternity ...
Richard lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Reading TRACKS IN THE ASH, one is reminded that life as we know and live it is only a fraction of a far more extensive reality. we actually know quite a bit about that greater reality but definitely pay too little attention to it. Enjoyed the great read.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Excellent Ron! I like the info I hadn't heard of it, but I just wrote a poem about how we can look at things back a million years and I wonder how it is possible to know that we know;-)Awesome isn't it? Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Cool write, Ron! At some point all the pieces will be gathered and the mysteries laid to rest as facts in our history books.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Ron

Very often the fragments and parchments of our past, are pointers to our future well being and security..

This reminded me of the hieroglyphs and petroglyphs of Utah and New Mexico, which are perpetual reminders from the dim past of our ancestral parentage

Peter

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Wonderful piece!! The rhme was perfect but the subject was unique!!


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