Ronald, i want to wish you a very merry Christmas. I know you aren't fond of my style of poetry and I'm not exactly a fan of rhyme but I have developed a healthy respect for you work and realized how beautiful rhyme and flow can be together. thank you and have a great holiday
It isn't easy being happy. Sometimes it feels like life conspires to make things as hard as possible, never really relenquishing happiness over to us, for fear we might like being here too much I guess. Seriously though, can you imagine anything better than living?
~ Sara
Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall (Reader)
Reviewed on December 10, 2006
I work with people who have chronic mental and emotional problems. This poem could be my job description....facilitating the letting go of crutches. Thanks, I enjoyed this. JM
"So if you have all the answers,
yet fear the day you die.
Please examine your foibles,
and ask of their purpose, "Why?"
This says so much about the controlling tentacles of pride. Yes ... we always need to look at ourselves in an objective mirror to see how we're seen, and also to keep our eyes clear so we can stay on the path that we are supposed to tread. This is a great write.
with an underlying sense of pushing for better/greater
enjoyed this
Love Tinka
Aberjhani
~ Sara
Regis
"So if you have all the answers,
yet fear the day you die.
Please examine your foibles,
and ask of their purpose, "Why?"
This says so much about the controlling tentacles of pride. Yes ... we always need to look at ourselves in an objective mirror to see how we're seen, and also to keep our eyes clear so we can stay on the path that we are supposed to tread. This is a great write.
And the image ... it's you in triplicate.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg