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Techno Rubble
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
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Techno Rubble

Beneath the pile of rubble,
where mighty men once stood.
We searched for answers,
but found none very good.

A tribute to their perfection,
climbing to the pinnacle they could.
And not stop at reaching it,
or go where not they should.

First, they conquered all the beasts,
both large and small.
They understood not what they'd done,
they couldn't conquer all.

And then they conquered one another,
while heeding some higher-order.
To justify their continual murder,
in the name of where they'd come.

They took these places as their own,
and called them now civilized.
They took these places from their nature,
creating beauty in their perfect eyes.

But time and nature takes its course,
and civilization always dies.
If not from a natural catastrophe,
then from man's avarice, greed and lies.

An artificial world hastily rose,
as human population multiplied.
It covered every corner of the land,
and could not be denied.

An artificial system was wired,
to fill the insatiable need.
The artificial system was required,
to fill man's insatiable greed.

All nature's creatures large and small,
lived in a world created by default.
Man planned everything so well,
that nothing was left out.

It took a while,
but finally broke through.
Men no longer lived on the Earth,
they lived in a self-made zoo.

The natural selection,
that made him so smart and so strong,
had been engineered away,
so the weak could live on.

It wasn't his artificial intelligence,
that finally did him in.
It was his lack of intelligence,
to quell the technobabble din.

Of his world crashing down,
from his own benign neglect.
And the hopes of his children,
lost in the escalating wreck.

Like so many species long before,
his overpopulation rotted his core,
with anarchy rampant and no hope in sight,
mankind succumbed to a long dark night.

We can only riddle at the rubble they left,
we gather and hunt in the folds of its cleft.
They must have been great to build so high,
while we warm by the fire to an open sky.

Copyright 2008 © Ronald W. Hull

3/1/08


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 Reviews of "Techno Rubble"
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
"We can only riddle at the rubble they left,
we gather and hunt in the folds of its cleft.
They must have been great to build so high,
while we warm by the fire to an open sky"

This was MY revelational moment in the poem!

My hubby and I warm by a fire almost every night, to the open skies...thinking about all the crap!
I'm just assuming here, but, under the circumstances, we've all been asses! ...and in our end, we're all facing the same predicament..."survival mode" Get your butts in gear! LOL!
Thought-provoking blaze. . .
Masterful write, Ron...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
"It wasn't his artificial intelligence,
that finally did him in.
It was his lack of intelligence,"

AMEN!

This one is spot-on and makes the heart hurt Ron! Well done!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
"What nature doesn't do to us, will be done by our fellow man". (2)"Go ahead and hate your neighbor, go ahead and cheat a friend, do it in the name of Heaven, you can justify it in the end? There won't be any trumpets blowing, come the judgement day. One tin soldier rides away". The first quote is from an old Kingston Trio song. The last ore is fronm the song, "One Tin Soldier" from A "Billy Jack" movie. Appropriate thoughts for your poem Ron. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Quite a statement, Ron. You provide much substance for reflection via your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Some will attack your negativity BUT you see it clearly - either we the "conquerering Cro-Mags" spend more time conquering our greed for all sake's or our flower will bear bitter fruit! And I do not yet see this happening - those who decry "enviros, global-warming cautionists, other so called loonies" are usual the ones fighting the hardest to fill their bottomless desire to "build so high" And you are right, "man" will survive as a very different species, but this particular phase of civilization will fall one way or another
Perhaps some of us can still learn to "enjoy the warmth of the fire under an open sky" or we can change in a hurry before it may be too late (if not already)
All in all: another GREAT POEM that needs to be published NOW!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Very interesting indeed,great writing sweetie,stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Most interesting write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Yes, the apes; when they rule us will
take much better care of earth where we stays.
Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
I recognized that photo immediately & agree that just maybe we may end up like that movie & this poem did portend...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on March 2, 2008
The more advanced we become, the more stupid we discover we are - sobering, thought provoking write, very well penned -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 2, 2008
Mankind seems to be succumbing to a long dark night, faster and faster all the time, Ron. We're creatures of our own demise. Society has changed so much in the last 25 years, in good ways and in bad. For the good, we're better off, more times than not(even if we can have too much of a good thing); for the bad, God help us all.

Interesting poem and I love the picture!

Thanks,
Jill


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