Dew Drop Clause (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 4, 2015

I love playing with words; it's a lot of fun. You are very good at doing that, Ron; all the while also expressing some meaningful thoughts. This is delightful. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on March 28, 2015

A wonderful flow and message. Much enjoyed.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2015

Ron, a fun poem!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by D.E.Z. Butler

Reviewed on March 17, 2015

I picture the dew and the play with the clause and smile....thank you for the smile.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 17, 2015

I've always liked the poems you write with such ease and flows so well with the rhythm and rhyme, no matter what message you wish to convey to your readers.

Sandie

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on March 16, 2015

~Ron~
Love this poem and the image.
Dew dropping a smile!!!!

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 16, 2015

Not taking things personally is probably key. It's what you get and the price you pay for putting your stuff 'out there'. You never know what's going to come back and often it's refreshing for something other than 'the usual' to crop up in review. Guess we owe it to ourselves, to poetry and to others to take a little care with what we write in terms of composition but it's a pain to take oneself too seriously (serially?!) if genuine comments suggest improvements can be made. Politeness is key; do as you would be done by. As to having fun, that's certainly my aim in life! And trying not to rain on others' parades. :) xx

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on March 15, 2015

Life can be fun if you just relaxe a bit and live it! I love this piece, thank you. peace!!!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on March 15, 2015

Your humor, and love of life, shines here in your newest creation. Great image. rlc

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 15, 2015

Thanks for the levity and a well crafted poem to boot. And thank you for dew dropping in! May peace and love be always with you. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 15, 2015

For life is worth living,
and having a little fun.
A poke in the ribs,
a play on a pun.

Keep Having Fun - I'm sure gonna try to do so.

Reviewed by June Marshall

Reviewed on March 14, 2015

I just buried a good friend yesterday, read this little diddy and started to chuckle. Broke the sadness barrier and brought back the smiles. Thanks my friend, really cheered me up and gave me a new outlook for the rest of this month.

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras

Reviewed on March 14, 2015

...the beauty and simplicity of your poem aside...the title "Dew Drop Clause" suggests that this sturdy words aren't...just circumstances...but a true quality of a great poet's thinking...for that reason...the whole "lot" makes your reader...devouring the lines....in a reasonable way...it'd be fair to say...till the 2nd last stanza...when with the appearance of a gun and..."so put a smile on your face"...words started to reveal the virtual reality...
Thank you Ron, for sharing this enjoyable writing.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 14, 2015

Great sing-song rhyme

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on March 14, 2015

Meow!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Reviewed on March 14, 2015

I write for fun,
and not to win.
With paper and pen,
my mind goes for a spin.
it's not a crime to rhyme.
So dew drop in.

Michael D.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 14, 2015

Love the poem and perfect rhyming.