Mount Holy Hoax (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 7, 2017

WE all got our mountains to climb, it's all about attitude isn't it dear poet, some make mountains out of mole hills, some go for the summit, and others watch. I love mountains they are so majestic, thanks for the interesting read this morning. Have a blessed Sunday, xo

Reviewed by Darryl Ehlers

Reviewed on May 6, 2017

Hi Ron
A philosopher in your own right. Well done. One suggestion==
4th verse=1st line drop " easy " out of sentence. Keep it up
Pilgrim. Darryl Ehlers

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 6, 2016

WONDERFUL, RHYTHM, STYLE AND PHRASES. AND YOU'RE RIGHT; THERE'S NOTHING 'HOLY' ABOUT ANYONE AND WE WILL NEVER FULLY REALIZE THE COMPLETE QUENCHING OF OUR HOPES AND DREAMS NOR REACH THE PINNACLE OF OUR MOUNTAINS...ON THIS SIDE. SO I GUESS THE BEST ADVISE IS- WE HAD BETTER 'REACH' FOR THE SATISFACTION OF, '...THE SUBSTANCE OF THINGS HOPED FOR IN THE EVIDENCE OF THINGS NOT SEEN...' 'CAUSE IT'S ALL ABOUT THE 'OTHER' SIDE...AND LIVING BY FAITH AND 'TRYING'. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 2, 2016

In the flat land of coastal Virginia there is a mountain called "Mount Trashmore." They made a park out of it. It's made of decades of discarded trash. I think sometimes we truly do create our own mountains out of life's garbage.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on July 2, 2016

We all are unfinished paintings, and we all see life differently. I enjoyed reading your work very much

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by D. Mullis

Reviewed on July 1, 2016

You are a provocative writer...and your expression displays the emotions of your heart and mind.
I'm sure your journey in life has played a magnificent role in your perspectives, and thus I can't say I know how you feel. But I know One who does.
You're a remarkable man, for sure!
Keep writing!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 1, 2016

All this holy this or holy that is just a hoax

Holy Cow! I couldn't agree with you more.

Reviewed by Eva Pasco

Reviewed on June 28, 2016

If we achieve a goal, and whether it's lofty or not, the ensuing happiness may be our boost to the summit of a mountain.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 27, 2016

I may not completely agree, but this poem is written by a master of thought & ability to put it down on paper, and that is THE reason to read it & enjoy it...-e-

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Reviewed on June 26, 2016

We all have our own mountain to climb with lessons to learn through the choices we've made on this journey in life. Wonderfully written! Great poem, Ron!

Reviewed by Charles Neff

Reviewed on June 26, 2016

"We all wander in our own ways." Absolutely. But we don't have to wander alone. That's where perception and tolerance elbow in. You write perceptively and we have the choice of wandering beside you.
Charlie

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Reviewed on June 25, 2016

I've reached unseen heights.
I've had great falls.
I've been stuck in darkness,
and I've run into walls.
And holy shit,
your poem says it all.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on June 25, 2016

Ron~
For hopes and dreams always to reach our goal.
Beautiful write.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup

Reviewed on June 25, 2016

One of your best, Ron. There is no end to the trove of imaginary inspirations, of nothings we might turn into vision and courage.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on June 25, 2016

Oh! I love this too much!! This is a keeper!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 25, 2016

"It makes no difference, top or bottom,
who is dealt the best of life's hand."

I believe we are dealt the hand we make for ourselves, Ron.