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Philly's City Hall
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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i started this on one of my trips to Philly this past year to be with my sister-just dug it back up


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Philly's City Hall

 

I drive down past blocks of row houses,

Down the hill toward historic Philadelphia,

And my thoughts wander as I see the beautiful skyline,

To the year eighteen-hundred and seventy-one,

When the statue of Her founder, William Penn,

Marked the tallest habitable building in the world.

 

But tonight as I see the lights of the city,

(The skyline is clearly visible, without Mr. Penn's hat),

Where broken promises paved the way,

For 'One Liberty Place" to obscure City Hall.

 

Founded and built by McArthur and Thomas,

It remains the tallest masonry building in the world,

But in nineteen-hundred and eighty four,

The gentleman's agreement was cast aside,

And Mr. Penn is no longer clearly visible.

 

But this broken promise was clearly to blame,

For a drought with Philadelphia's sporting teams,

For the curse of Billy Penn ensured,

That no championships were won until after,

The year two-thousand and seven!

 


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 Reviews of "Philly's City Hall"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 20, 2009
well done

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 10, 2009
A good historical write with a little twist!....M

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Clever, perceptive, well-written historical pen, Karen. Never been to Philly, but I think you've captured its spirit and incredible history. Your birthday? Well I hope your day is filled with joy!

Lin

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Thanks for the history lessons, I enjoyed this very much.
As Fee says: Happy Birthday to you my dear friend!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Interesting history of a great city thanks for sharing.

BTW

Happy Birthday to you, Happy birthday to you, Happy birhtday dear Karen.......Happy birthday to you.


hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Love historical pieces, and this is a goody!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
Been there, don't remember nothing of it because it was a Sunday trillion years ago and the city was as empty of people as someone had shouted "the red jackets coming!"
The only car around nearly hit me for jay walking on abandoned Philly!

Georg


Reviewed on June 9, 2009
I have been to Philly; way back when I was young. LOL I wouldn't mind going back, but I would prefer someplace like Alaska. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

That, or Ohio! :) Or maybe Tennessee or Kentucky! :) Those are great places, too (plus I was born in Ohio; lived there a good part of my life, until 1999; then moved to Texas. Now ten years later, I find myself still asking: "Why????").

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on June 9, 2009
I enjoy reading this,very nicely done and I appreciate the history lesson,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed on June 9, 2009
pretty close to home Karen, great poetic history lesson, moms ok for now, thanks, hugs

Reviewed by Marilyn Rice
Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Karen,
You just don't see buildings that old down here in the south. At first I thought it was from somewhere in England. I remember the first time we went to Punxsutawney to spend Thanksgiving with some internet friends of ours. It felt like a different world. Very good write.
Marilyn

Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Thank you for sharing this, Karen. Nicely done!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Been there too, but you have written this so beautifully it makes me want to return....and what a wonderful piece of history you have written here, Karen!

Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Been there! Went in 1978 (it was my graduation present). Enjoyed it so much - second oldest sis used to live in Philly, Center City area. Would love to go back. On my way, at least in my mind, through your vivid descriptive write - thanks for the memories, Karen, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Very informative and historical, with bits of fact therein.
Creative Karen, enjoyed it.

Cynthia

Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Dear Karen,
Your poem makes me want to go and visit that beautiful place. Well written my friend.
Marcia

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Agree with Eileen. Wonderful

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Wow! A superb poem with info that may surprise some,and
a wonderful bit of history, well told! Thank you Karen!
I had heard about the championship, but never knew if it was true!


Love,
Eileen


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