Bullying is not Cool (poem) by Lil Ms Butterfly on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 7, 2009

Hey lil' sis
this is a great poem it done really nicely, it almost goes with a grown up version i have called a just say no but it's not really a poem.
well catcha round
Acir� C (aka Big Sis)

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

YOU got that right Evie
bullying is bad!
YOur mom should send ALL your poems into Highlights for kids, MOm- look up on internet, Highlighting.com or highlightingforchildren.com Good luck!
You amaze me with your writing flowwww and your writing talents Evie!
Warm hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
BE Happy!
and get into Hightlights, I know a few will make it!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 16, 2007

I agree, Evie, unfortunately though bullying is part of growing up even for the bully...he will come around eventually, though not always as I remember a couple from High School that still to this day like to "act" tougher than the rest of us...Find Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

Evie,

Welcome to AD, you're among friends.

No, bullying is NOT cool. Having been on the receiving end, I can attest to the long lasting effects on psyche. An important, potentially life saving write, very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 21, 2006

For one so young you offer a wise and wonderful message that can not be repeated enough. Bullys are losers and friends are to be cherished. Like your mother I can see you have nowhere to go with your writing but into the future and I will look forward to your future works.
Felix

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

Evie, you've got it going on! Great write, on a sore subject for so many kids. Bless you. Michelle

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2006

Very nice words about things which are not nice to do, and they were written so well . . . Plus it all rhymed. Great!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 18, 2006

A-wow....this is really a cool write Evie...you tell them girl!!

Welcome to the DEN girl!!

Tell your mom I say thank you....and the girl from down under...is tracking you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on August 17, 2006

Welcome Evie!
Your poetry carries a fine message... Your parents can be proud!

One of my special-needs grandsons was the object of horrifying bullying several years ago...we had to bring in the police, and finally, remove him from public schools. I understand, they have taken increased in-school measures to combat it now.
Prayer is a powerful weapon - and so is your pen. I hope many others join you
in renouncing bullying!

God bless you, Evie
Rhonda [ps. Evie is one of my little-known nicknames! that's what drew me here] LOL

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 17, 2006

Evie, your parents taught you well! This is a fine poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 17, 2006

Good advice, Evie; very well done! I have been there; and being bullied hurts. I still feel the pain years later and it is because of this that I don't have a very good sense of self esteem. There are plenty of times where I still feel I am ugly and am not worth anything.

(((HUGS))) and mcuh love, your new friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on August 17, 2006

I would like to recommend that Peter LOL, as in our days at school it was acceptable, but it's hands off now, as Evie knows, and only these unacceptable bullies who are quick and cunning get one away without reprimand.
I just squeeeeeeel loud and long at the teachers till they sort it LOL.
Im proud as any Mom could be...Keep these coming my little sweetie.
MOM

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 17, 2006

Evie

Bullies are just cowards..
Ignore them...and if that is not possible...Just bop them on the nose..:)

Peter