Our path........... (poem) by Karen Palumbo on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

After the rain , comes the sun, shining on earth with its beauty.. I really liked this poem ......m

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Deeper message my friend....Beautiful poem and great photo to compliment.

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 1, 2007

Photo and verses complement one another perfectly to present your message, Karen. Well done. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on June 1, 2007

very uplifting gives one something to think about
....it helps keep(not for a better fit) people inside so in my hood the rain is lifesavors

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

Loved the picture, and the thoughts within these lines.

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

It looks like all the signs are there so we all better think about our paths

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

Wonderful, wonderful!!

Reviewed by William Haynes

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

I've wondered the very same thing, let's hope the next generation is wiser
bill

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

Such a wonderful write my friend, it is amazing that I was just thinking yesterday about the drout that we are experiencing here in Kentucky as other southern states are as well. The grass is crunching beneath our feet, the crops are drying up, creeks that once anxiously flowed are now at a stand still, we keep expecting rain, but nothing more than a sprinkle, not enough to settle the dust. The heat has been terrible, May has felt like July or August. Maybe the heat is a bit of wrath from God, trying to get our attention, a wake up call! Enjoyed the powerful meaning within your write my friend!
BLessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Really This Is Romantic Write,i.e. I TRASK Have Cried More Tears For Your Our Lost (Dead) Molested Children In This Physical World Than Any Tears From (Heaven)Any Angels...

Take Care Of Your Children Our Children 1st
The World (God) Takes Care Of Itself... c 1979/2007 TRASK...

Then There Will Be No Need For Any Angel Tears But Only Your Our Tears Of Rejoice...

Tears,Your Friend, TRASK

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Funny how we are fighting a war while being told by evangelists that this is God's way. So much is done using God's words warped by man to suite man's needs. I found beauty from your words that the angels are crying for us. I really believe you have the truth here and it is much appreciated. Thank you for sharing. Liz

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Such a nice inspiration of expressions...you show many of the spiritual emotions I think the same way
Every time it rains I think
That is God tears because of the chaos our world is in
But I guess it could be angels tears!
Love this poem it brings things prospective
And as always Robert...Your pictures are outstanding
Love And Peace to you always
your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

A good write and plenty of food for thought. Lady J

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Karen, gives one reason to stop and to think...could it be angels tears? There's so much compassion & thought provoking images in this poem. This poem will cause many readers to stop and to think about the situation of our world. I truly loved this inspirational writing.

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Could it be, the rain that I see,
is not rain, but tears for our fight..
Are the angels above crying for us

This is a beautiful and inspirational write. The imagery of the angels tears being rain is awesome. I really loved this.

And my compliments to your husband on the wonderful picture.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

It's something I wonder about also Karen.
These faults are created by greed, in my
humble opinion. Angels shouldn't have to
cry, I don't think.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

A thought provoking write Karen.....something to to think about!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Excellent thought provoker you have penned, Karen; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Karen,

An excellent thought provoker you have penned in beautiful lines: my Karen was asking me the other day if God was mad at Texas, because of all the rain and storms! Well done! I concur with Lena, one of your best. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love (and stay safe), Karla.

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Karen, What an outstanding and insightful write you've penned. You have struck the nail on the head. Here is a verse of Scripture I found just last week: "But if the wicked will turn from all their sins that he hath committed, and keep all my statutes, and do that which is lawful and right, he shall surely live, he shall not die." Ezekiel 18:21. Perhaps the angels are trying their hardest to wake us up and turn us around. Great write, Karen. I enjoyed this one. It's one of your very best. Thank you.

God Bless
Much love and hugs
Lena

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Beautiful poem, Karen. No doubt the angels weep.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Karen, wise words to heed.
You took me to Proverbs 3:33-35 this morning.
Maybe today the sun is shining on you.
God Bless
DWB
(I'll go check your blog to see what happened today)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

as the path we have chosen is not the best.
Anger, hatred, animosity and war,
makes us so weary the angels can not rest.

Mankind's path seems filled with the above since we first walked the earth - no wonder the angels weep so much.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

A beautiful rhyming piece. So sad and all to true.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

With so much hatred in the world I'm afraid many more tears will be shed until the Lord will announce His second coming and put an end to this world gone mad.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

"Our Path" is really beautiful, Karen, as is the picture of the tiny church. I've never thought of rain as angel tears, but your poem aptly gives rain the name.

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on May 30, 2007

Karen,
This is written in such a way that it could stand the test of time and have been written during the time of your most recent blog as well as the Civil War, WWI, WWII, Korean, Vietnam, or today's war headed by a certain President Geo. W. Bush.
Very well written and full of pain and agony WITH the knowledge that tomorrow will be a better day.

George

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

Every time I see a little church I wonder how all the love of God can be inside with such a little place at His disposition.
But has long as we mantain or faith, we will never lose the path not the direction, despite wars or anger, greed or abject poverty.
Georg

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

Karen, in every way this poem is exquisite!

love the visions of angels, this piece has an

uplifting effect, as well as being powerfully written,from the heart, thanks for sharing your talent...best regards, mike

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2007

Very inspiring...
Sunny days ahead we hope....
Neat little church in picture..