Discolored and torn......
A silent hush, not even a stray breeze,
an empty room, yet memories abound.
Children's laughter once permeated,
pulling up a chair not hearing a sound.
A broken window off in the distance,
shards of glass spread all over the floor.
Dust and cobwebs distort the dulled light,
what once was rich, now remains poor.
Reaching for a blanket that once was new,
dirty and tattered, discolored and torn.
Wrapping it around from shoulder to shoulder,
it carries a strange scent, lonely and forlorn.
Listening to the surf beating against the rocks,
at the bottom of the cliff, relentless and steady.
Many others have stood by this window,
staring out, patiently, waiting and ready.
An eerie uneasiness, an overwhelming feeling,
encompasses every pore, as never before.
Another is here, though not to be seen,
an essence, a strangeness, a spirit of yore.
An overpowering presence trying to reach out,
bridging what was with what is today.
Sound of music, sad, muted and soft,
rusted music box, a waltz it does play.
Standing to dance, a gentle spirit appears,
as intoxicating sounds play havoc with emotion.
The warmth of love filling this old room,
is one of everlasting devotion.
Two warmly embrace as they glide along,
tantalizing music plays, shattering any defeat.
The warmth and love shared in this room,
will throughout eternity continue to repeat.
As morning approaches it is time to depart,
carefully place the worn blanket on the floor.
With falling tears, leaving memories behind,
beginning a new day, while closing the door.
Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
7/28/2009 © All rights reserved
Love And Prayers
Always!!
Tammy
Hugs,
Sheila
Anna
The atmosphere is very well described, with presence felt beyond physical reality.
staring out, patiently, waiting and ready"..."bridging what was with what is today". Very beautiful! Made my mood heavy (it seldom happens). Wonderful poem. Thanks.
Susan
This is a poem that makes me think of the memories left behind as time passes. My father's mother died when he was seven-years-old. When I was about that age, I remember him taking us to see the foundation of an old house where he had lived happy memories with his mother and a complete family. I remember looking around to see if I could find something of his past there, like a broken toy or something.
Now my father and mother are gone, too. However, the memories of them live on until I'm gone, too.
Old rooms and homes have lots of memories within them.
Wonderful poem.
Patty
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The setting and indeed the memories may be 'discolored and torn' but your delivery is anything but, a poignant rendering that makes it all come alive again in a gentle, sensitive capture.
John
Blessings,
Christine
The passion you experienced writing this is palpable
richard
A perfect poem of a perfect time.
Georg
Tim
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Fee
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Hugs! Jasmin Horst
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I enjoyed
Have a great day
The Buzzard
(((HUGS))) and much ove, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
Absolutely beautiful, the words jump back at me. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Many blessings,
Nicole
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
In Christs Love
Michelle~