Boil and bubble winds of trouble Like a war you reduce to rubble pounding like a battering ram acting like a man bim bam embracing terrain with full force earth and sky have intercourse
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Rain whispered your name as the wind carried it aloft I felt you thunder over me but your touch was so soft then your lightning pierced swift,sure and deliberate but you were considerate gentling the excitement to keep my heart content I splashed in your puddles frolicking like a happy child sticking out my tongue to taste the raindrops I told the clouds don't stop I let your gusts embrace me with all of their intensity and as you blustered and blew I knew, that you were the one storm I would never forget!
Great metaphorical write that conveys the dual message of an intense storm, and the ways of a caring and loving partner !
You have a knack for beautifully combining the art of nature and passion Eileen !
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Peter
Just like a man to bring out the "just like a woman" in you, Eileen!! ;)) Reminds me of an old Dylan song. And George Clooney in the starring role wouldn't be half bad if this was a movie... yes, who can beat nature in terms of showing us what REAL passion is all about. Wonderful metaphor here. TY Kate xx
Excellent metaphor Eileen. Yep, some of them are so electrifying and wild we just never forget them. Excellent imagery and graphic. I think this is one storm you might just have to ride out.
Take care,
Sherry
And neither will I, Eileen...neither will I. THANK GOD! :)
This ranks right up there with "We Were Twin Storms"...thunderous passion, illuminating joy in the power of your words...yes. Definately a keeper (thanks). BRAVA!!!!!
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You have a knack for beautifully combining the art of nature and passion Eileen !
Super picture conveys the input of the composition
Peter
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Take care,
Sherry
Go, U.S.A.! Go, U.S.A.! U.S.A.!! U.S.A.!! (WHOOPS! SORry, the Americans just came into the Olympic stadium in Torino, Italy! LOL)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Bravour, Eileen...you're as mighty as the elements in your passions
Gina
This ranks right up there with "We Were Twin Storms"...thunderous passion, illuminating joy in the power of your words...yes. Definately a keeper (thanks). BRAVA!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I love the poem, I love that pic.