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Escape
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Mind scars, like prison bars
Barriers to freedom


Human beings drawn to
Being in bondage


Either we are too ignorant to know better
Or we have a bent towards it


How else to explain we are all behind bars
of one kind or another


Even when we successfully escape them
We eventually erect more


So what is the answer to our recidivism
When do we  cry "ENOUGH" and mean it


Sometimes we hold ourselves hostage
While never taking the blame


Whether it be
Family matters
Life styles
Religion
Politics
Love


We find ourselves in bondage making mind scars
Which keep us behind a  barrier of bars


Escape can only come from  partnering with
The One who  holds the key to all things


It's up to us to join with Creator, to be set free!

eT
  


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 Reviews of "Escape"
Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
An inspiring work, identify with this very much. A tear for humanity.

Safi

Reviewed on May 16, 2006
An important and uplifting message wonderful penned!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on May 16, 2006
Very insightful words Eileen, excellent writing!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on May 16, 2006
Very eloquently written, but very difficult to implement.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
Great write...enjoyed.

EDL

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
He said, "Believe in Me and I will set you free."

This is the recourse of living with fear.

Excellent verse Sis.
Susan

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
Reflective of resilience, enabling us to resume our original shape after being barred, but never abandoning the course of faith. Resiliency comes from faith's benefit program, when we recognize there is no need to turn away from faith or seek a better alternative, because there is no better alternative. Freedom comes when there is spiritual belief, and when there is spiritual belief, mind scars diminish, but we need to keep faith refreshed, because thorns are ever present. Nice poem, Eileen.

Sage

Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
Yay! I wanted to stand up and clap and cheer at the end of that! That's a great poem, very powerfully stated, unambiguous, truthful. Excellent!

SFx

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
So true, Eileen.. As a free soul, I couln't bare being in any sort of seclusion of grace and movement. Excellent topic and words are beautiful

Dove

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
A lot of thought went into this damn fine poetry. Ah, when you are right, your are right.

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
It's up to us to get on the bus that to heavens door does go, He'll take us with our baggage, then toss it out the back, we need nothing but our heart for Him, and nothing will we lack. For His Grace and awesome power, are more than sufficient for thee, and the ticket costs, but, our miserable selves, what a deal! It might as well be free.

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
Excellent wise words
Our souls long for freedom; your poem provides the path
thanks for sharing
love and peace

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
A friendship with God leads to a friendship with all His creation if we are wise.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
It's all about liberating and freeing ourselves from the bondage of fear and prejudice..
The majority of mankind are stricken with these vices, which can only be removed and erased by trusting implicitly in the Supreme Being...
You excel in this theme Eileen !
Peter

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2006
Very, very true, we do choose our own prisons all too often because for some it is much easier to be a victim and blame others, than it is to have a shred of personal responsibility. Great.


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