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Shadow Dust
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I saw a figure in the dark
could not believe my eyes
it wasn't like any other
surely it was a disguise
no one in my neighborhood
or any other for that matter
would look like this entity
I felt my teeth begin to chatter


the figure clearer when nearer
I barely saw shoulder length hair
couldn't  define facial features
it wore what looked like fluorescent
white silk ,knee length tee shirt
it's legs like an Eagles with talons
and behind arms and across back
it had wings that looked like silver


Just as I was about to say something
it flew up over me circling round
then it was gone, I was disappointed
I stood in awe, wanting to see it again
still walking home I saw it's shadow
flying over me,too high to really see
then it swooped down right next to me
I looked into captivating angelic  eyes


Though dark,I was surrounded by light
in moments it flew ahead  to an animal
again in shadows,I couldn't make it out
but it grasped what looked like a lamb
both disappeared high into the sky
distraught, not knowing what it meant
 I saw the figure alone,plunge to earth
when it hit the ground it turned to dust


I reached the pile of dust in the shadows
some of it sparkled with a  neon glow
what it all meant, I wonder if I'll ever know


etw-2007


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 Reviews of "Shadow Dust"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
enjoyed the read, powerful writing

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Quite a painting, et. Good draw on mystical magic. Really liked this one, too.

George

Reviewed by Alexandra Midnight (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2007
Wow. Is this a true story it is wonderful. I wonder what it would mean too. The you explaine ti really makes it seem really mysterious. Well done.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 15, 2007
Wow! What a captivating write my friend, a thought provoking write indeed! Angels are a mystical or mysterious subject that captivate many. I do believe that we encounter them along life's highway...enjoyed this excellent offering very much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2007
Could be the same entity as Judes, something strange in the yanky neighbourhood, who yer gunna call.....Dust Busters...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 14, 2007
Well, guess we talk about "battle in the heavenlies" without ever stopping to visualise what we might mean by this. The Bible itself is FULL of symbolism and quite horrific images of spiritual realms at times. You have very rare insight, Eileen, and as you ponder these things in your heart I have no doubt you will be given revelation at some time or other. Like Mary, perhaps you just have to "store it up" for now. You won't have been given this for no reason, that's a certainty. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 14, 2007
Most captivating write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on June 14, 2007
Looking into the eyes of danger or love... is there truly any difference? Both are compelling, exciting, dangerous and uncertain. Three cheers! Incredibly well-done. -- Jeff

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 14, 2007
captivating and cryptic ... sometimes its best we don't ...

Reviewed on June 14, 2007
This is quite enigmatic but surely you will know it soon. this write made me feel glued to the screen as I read it. Wonderful. GBQ
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed on June 14, 2007
Excellent write, Eileen; well done yet again! BRAVA!

(((HUG)S)) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on June 14, 2007
Eileen,

You sure kept me in suspense......a mystery to solve! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
Very captivating and suspensful! Really enjoyed this one very much. The mystery of it all.........

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
You had me on the edge of my seat..
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
E.T., this sounds like the startings of a great fiction story...I loved the tone in your voice as I read line after line and the images portrayed were magnificent and you captured a mystery throughout the poem. I say, "This is great!"

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
What a beautiful description of an Angel of darkness portraying as light...then being destroyed for touching one of God lambs!!!

God Bless, God Speed,
~Spirit Warrior

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
Wow!

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
You have created a beautiful mystery with your poem. I wanted more.

Reviewed on June 13, 2007
The lines held my attention from beginning to end. Dream?

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
Wow, What a wonderful fantastic write. Phantasmagoria at its best...Beautiful...Joyce

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
Well ... for sure if this is real, and not just a work of imagination, it certainly seems to be a spiritual harbinger Sugar Chum.

Michele had a vision, of sorts too, last week, and she is NOT one given to fancy. She saw what appeared as a greenish translucent shape that sparkled hovering over one end of the bedroom. She felt no anxiety, only peace and fascination. After several minutes it moved out through one of the walls.

You can only shake your head. This universe is filled with incredible mysteries that defy our programming. Excellent mysterious write!

Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Richard

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 13, 2007
This is a real scary one Eileen and I wonder also if we will ever know or want to.


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