Unlikely Astral Lights (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on August 1, 2007

powerful tale

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on August 1, 2007

An interesting and inspiring write, enjoyed.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on August 1, 2007

A pen that captures one's attention

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

I was once on vacation at a lake in NC. This true story was told by the other pasengers in the boat. A lightning storm approached and everyone said let's head for shore. The boat owner, very drunk, stood up, held up his hands and said, "Go ahead God get me!"......He did.

Walt

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

This is interesting, I'm intrigued.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

The picture looks like a scene right out of Central Park in New York.....When the lord calls we must go......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

Such is fate some days. good write. Lady J

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

,,,and what timing, our tv areal was hit by lightning, the tv was saved from blowing up, by blowing up the digi box first.
This has that black and white nightmare-ish quality.

Before your hit by lighning your hair stands up to attract the lecky.
(Andy shaves his head)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

The dark drama is riveting..the story a tale such as those classic ballads were written about...the setting fits the story...love it, Eileen!

Gina

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

Bittersweet . . .

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

Fantastic story!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

wow! fascinating write!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

seems they were guided by compassion and played their roles perfectly

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

That was a story to remember, I was going to say Tiger Lily, but minx suits you much more ;) Victor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

What an eerie, intriguing story, Tiger Lily. And what a picture! Lightning, although so fascinating to watch, can truly be very deadly as well.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

No doubt about it they are talking with the angels in heaven after they risked theirs lives to save a man and in so doing met their demise.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

Great great story poem sugar chum ... it can be scary at times - like arthritic gnarled fingers grabbing at the earth. You rock!
Light and Love ...
Richard

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

The heavens declared their astral light would burn forever in the night,lighting the path to realms of glory ,where angels would tell their heroic story.

Love these lines. Very fabolous poetic story. Good hearts die while protecting other hearts. GBQ

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

Eileen, electrifying story, love the picture, well done!

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

*GAD*

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 31, 2007

Eileen,

Holy smoke, that is a little too close for comfort! Happened to Karen and I last week, we were at a local restaurant when a sudden furious storm popped up: we watched a bolt hit right across the street, blew out a transformer. Which one? The one that controls our power! Out for eight hours LOL S c a r y! Lightning is beautiful, but also deadly. Excellent write.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.