Nomadic Melody (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 7, 2008

The sadness is pervasive. Tears of sorrow drip freely from a broken heart. I hope this is just a write? A beautiful piece of work E T. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Much pain is emitted in this sorrow filled poem. Melodies linger in haunting refrains....M

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Heartwrenching. Brilliantly written. Liz

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

ET, This touches my heart more than you can imagine..Lovely music also.
Much Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

You have done a marvelous job creating a poem that can rip and tear at the heartstrings so, blessings Holly

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Pain and Sorrow . . . Sorrow and Pain . . . Lawd . . . It'll make you insane . . . Not meaning to make light of this well-written poem of Pain and sorry . . . Sorrow and Pain . . . Telling it like it is . . . My way . . .

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Eileen, being duped by a lover hurts as bad as getting one's teeth pulled. You've captured the hurt and the pain that comes from words written in honest and sincerity. The images were marvelous especially, "All that's left for me to do is to take your gift away from you!" This is just plain excellent!

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

It hurts terribly to let a love go and a love that has gone wrong. I sympathize with this verse and it tells so much but it is what has to be done sometimes. Your feelings are tremendously expressed in this verse. **********

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Your words sing of sadness, but intermingled with a little anger, resolve and strength.
A difficult task to incorporate all of that. You did a fine job!

How are those eyes??
Cryssa

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Wow, even without the melody, those words still sing.
Wnderful!
Becca~

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Wonderful title - stirring write!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

We each have that certain melody that haunts us...I feel so much sadness and hurt in this eloquent write...excellent Eileen!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by RM Green

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

So sad to learn of a love gone wrong... but you are a master of the pen and you have made us feel the last song as it's sung.

Great write, ET.. but then again, that's just YOU!

RM

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Wonderfully written Eileen, find someone that sings just for you, you deserve to be the one and only. Powerfully penned. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of "Nomadic Melody". It made me visualize the days of George Sand and Chopin... I can hear the piano in the background.

In respect and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

You can simply take his song away by not receiving it!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

A moving sad write, Eileen! But so well written!!!
I hope all is well with you!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

I
Cast a spell of impotence
On thee

WOW!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Powerful writing, Eileen; hope you are okay! You are ever in my prayers! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Oh Eileen I feel hurt, pain and saddness in your words, although they were beautifully shared with us. Those words come to easy to be from their hearts. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Oh my,I feel the pain in these words sweet lady,Please have a Happy,and safe day..your in my thoughts...Hugsss,much love too you

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

ET, what you need is a warm sunset and and early evening with the sky full of stars (no moon) a little bit campfire just big enough to roast the marshmallows and a few saguaros as bodyguards as we whisper stories to each other until a coyote call remind us that it is another world out there.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 2, 2008

Sadness, heartache...all beautifully told.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

False love gets its fire doused by the water of your words

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Eileen,

Sadness lingers in these lines - haunting melody you pen into my ears and heart. Well done -

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Eileen, I pray that you are okay and doing fine. "Nomadic Melody" sings of distraught heartache and the pain of disillusionment, so well written that it screams through the computer screen.....

Be always safe,
Karen