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Garden of Love
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The smell of Gardenia's permeate
her senses and she has no defenses
against the dreams of him holding
her as they converse in whispers
in-between the nibbles and kisses
working themselves into a state
of such arousal many times they
can't wait to go into the bedroom
so they make love in the garden
on a bed of sumptuous soft grass

she becomes moist with memories
until through softly falling tears
 his visage fades into the eons
of yesterday's where she spends
all her days alone,while he travels
the unknown having chosen a solo path
she can't follow so she's left to wallow
in loneliness which is excrutiating
when the Gardenia's bloom and her
beautiful garden turns to gloom
where these memories derail the joy
she used to feel leaving her insides
to bleed with her need for him

etw~

 

 


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 Reviews of "Garden of Love"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Very beautiful, very romantic!!!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on December 10, 2008
This is a gem of a poem fill with deep and powerful feelings.Beautifully written ET,take care

Edwin

Reviewed on December 9, 2008
kind of sad but very effective well versed to the point of showing the pain of loneliness for a past love.....+++++

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Yes, sad...but so beautifully told, Eileen.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
so deep is the passion here! nicely written

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
a passionate, beautiful garden and poem ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
this blooms so sensual and serene then shifts as does the dying gardenia, wilting into brown...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Eileen,
Gene and Christine say it well, a sad tale beautifully told, exquisite as it sad.
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
...my goodness this tugs at my heart...exquisite as is sad!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
escaping love's sad tale revealed in a poem of elegance -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Dear Eileen,

You are so good!! Always!! It's a great pleasure to visit your Den!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Oh Eileen, this is exquisite...touching a memory of my own
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Sad and beautiful, Eileen.

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Oh ET, I read this last night and it just tugged at my heart, it is lovely and sad......so real
pax A

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
his visage fades into the eons
of yesterday's where she spends
all her days alone,while he travels
the unknown having chosen a solo path

A very sad piece, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
The poem almost describes a garden long long ago in Japan, and I wonder if she felt her heart bleeding with her need for him...
Thanks for the memories, ET

Georg


Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
A sad tale beautifully told. -gene.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Mmmmmmmmmmm. Despite the sadness and pain -- and maybe, in a way, because of them -- this sounds and feels so goooood. I love gardenias and you make us see their delicate, glowing, white petals and smell their heavenly scent. T h a n k . y o u !! xxOxx 'Pea' xxOxx

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
The rhymes are beautiful!!!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed on December 7, 2008
An attachment to fond memories the hardest to leave aren't they, your japanese garden encapsulates that thought,a beautiful wreath of gardenias let flow on the pond, and place a burning lotus candle within. Your pain and yearning, expressed succinctly in tears and words of longed for love. Hugs! Eileen

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
This is beautiful with much sadness....Warmth and Love, Carin

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Too bad it's a memory--it seems so real.

Ron

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
A masterpiece of wishful, yearning for yesteryear. Bittersweet. Awesome. Liz

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
I come to this garden alone,
like the sins of those gone on before me
and I weep for my wrongs,
and I cry for those left . . .

This poem slapped my upside my head . . . Hard . . .

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
I concur with Richard below entirely Eileen
A beautiful, soft and bittersweet reminisce of a lost love for whatever reason. However no love is ever lost completely, for we always retain a special love within us for that former influence on our life.
I love the exquisite white gardenia too, with its overpowering heady scent.
Kudos to you
Love
Peter

Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Eileen,

Sublime: favorite lines:

" ... as they converse in whispers
in between the nibbles and kisses ...." how soon it ends. Powerfully, poignantly penned, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on December 7, 2008
My dear Eileen,
In your Garden of Love, you've given us a romantic prelude but sad view of the heartache of a lost love. Sometimes it's from abandonment and other times it's from "duty calls," such as a military tour in Iraq. But whatever the reason, the heartache and pain of loneliness is often unbearable.

As one who shares a steadfast love for a lifetime with the same woman and one who, also, loves the aromatic and visual splendor of blooming gardens, this poem deeply stirs my emotions.

And your picture is glorious.

Thank you for this wonderful treat!

Richard

Reviewed on December 7, 2008
Am honored to be the first to review this G O R G E O U S poem, Eileen; fantastic! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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