Mankind's weak spots (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

great poem. Mankind is helpless that he cannot even control his heartbeat, leave alone other things. GBQ

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 22, 2011

THIS IS SO VERY TRUE. WE EXIST ONLY BECAUSE 'HE' ALLOWS US TO...
THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Reviewed on March 16, 2011

So very, very true. Some countries don't seem right for Man to live in. I guess easy to say in a country that thus far does not have life threatening natural disasters hanging like the sword of Damocles.

What a wonder people they are. No raping, looting, shooting, violence, as we saw with Haiti and New Orleans.

It does make you think what's next. Long Mile island was the fear years ago when I was just a lad.

Could we be using technology that we are not ready, nor mature enough to use yet?

This just seems overwhelming, like London in the 40's.

Well done Tiggs xxx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 15, 2011

We can learn not to build where nature ravishes but we cannot avoid all disasters. It is time that we start thinking about how we are treating the Earth before the Earth strikes back.

Ron

Reviewed by Suzi Sundquist (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2011

Let us join hands, in unity, and remember... there is power in numbers and prayer can heal all wounds. Life is temporary and every minute counts.

God bless you, sweet friend.

Big love 'n hugs~

Lil' Suzi

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on March 15, 2011

All we can is pray like you say...we can only pray.
This has been a horrid year...my home town was flooded (Ipswich)
then our neighbours New zealand crashed by Eathquake...now Japan...
I fear the worst is yet to come but we are the lucky ones Eileen...Faith in a higher Power is such a comfort.
Hugs always
and love
from
kay

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on March 15, 2011

So true, Eileen. This is one of your best poems, too. Great writing!
Sheila

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

as you know, our planet is in constant flux (as well as the entire universe) ... all that living beings can hope is not to be caught up in its wrath ...

insightful and well written poem, Eileen ...

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

Mother Nature is indeed fickle and she will not change for the likes of us. Your final stanza says it all. Patrick

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

Very sad indeed sweet lady as always well written indeed..stay safe and well..Hugss,much love too you

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on March 14, 2011

I pray everyday any way. But as far as nature goes what else can we do? It is all up to GOD!!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

when we surrender the idea of being in "control" and allow the knowing of helpless and everything is "what is" we shall find incredible peace...believe you are in the right time and place and even if a disaster strikes...so what? we are infinite eternal beings...no worries ;)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

So sad to see, so many inocent lives are lost and we cannot question WHY. Another great write Eileen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

A poignant, compassionate work, Eileen,
and to fully appreciate in every sense
the devastation and loss is just beyond us.
Japan has suffered terribly
and every heart goes out to the people.

John

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Dear Eileen, well said. What can we do against the power of nature.
Pray, Pray and Pray. Love Emile

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

I am blessed to be writing straight after Gene who articulates my heartfelt pain exactly. One tragedy on top of another is rocking our planet and at last we are beginning to realise this is no storm in a teacup. I live only a quarter of a mile inland and only 9 metres about sea level myself. Purbeck is sorrounded by water. Yet I am free to choose and I choose... the beauty of the natural world which it is my privilege to be able to inhabit. I am completely at her disposal. The thought is humbling indeed. My mind cannot take in what it is to lose over 10,000 souls in one immense wave. May our spirits speak what is otherwise unutterable to somehow soothe this immeasureable grief. xx

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Thomas Wolfe once wrote that there's no knowing what knowing
is until you know what knowing is like. Sadly, today, my
thoghts are with the Japanese people who know precisely what
the horror of knowing is like.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Wise perspective, that Grace alone can see us through.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

It truly is so humbling to be reminded of how helpless we are to prevent disasters. A thought provoking poem Eileen.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

outstanding write Eileen
I never knew the true wrath of Nature
until I was struck by such sadden reality
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Eileen, So true! If only we could make it stop! All we can do is pray for better days... Love, and peace always! ~Chessly

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

The really humbling thing to realize is that (we) mankind is not in control. Nice write.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Donna Chandler

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Your description of the beauty and distruction of Mother Nature is well done. I'm glad I stopped by to read your work.

Donna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

We will never best Mother Nature, and in Her fury, we will always be helpless. And as you point out, we should all be praying for and helping those now in need.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

Excellent piece of work, my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 13, 2011

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Stunning account of the immensity of Mother Earth's natural disasters. It is awe inspiring.

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

poignant read

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Who to blame, if anyone, the creator, no, Nature, maybe? Such is life, we all gotta put up with some sort of problems in life...Pray...Jerseeeeeey

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Elieen,
Prayers work miracles, My prayers and compassion go to these people...by the grace of God go I.

Blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Eileen, your perspective is absolutely right on. We are children going around on the merry-go round of life. Our Creator built the operator and runs it. We are a captive audience. Our hearts and prayers go out to the Japanese people in their hour of need. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

So very true, we become very small in such enormous devistations, tsunami's, tornado's, floods,.... Prayer is Needed~
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

With prayer all things are possible and that is what is needed in this world of ours where calamities are happening almost every day.

George

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

Uh, we can also blame the creator.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 12, 2011

I appreciate this perspective that you share through your words here, Eileen. I often feel completely helpless in the face of many happenings. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis