I know i am at it again. It just seems that pretty well all the poems can be put to music which proves right what my brother said. All good songs come from a great poem. We all seem to be looking for that right person to fill our dreams and when we feel we've found them we think "Why can't that someone be you". Hope you enjoy.
Why Can't that Someone Be you
June 28, 2008 Words Written by Rose Marie Rideout
A perfect song is written,
From the words of your poem.
Words that uplift the heart,
And never left alone.
Wonderful words to set to music,
Felt throughout the air.
Words written from the heart,
That show how much you care.
Chorus They say I need you & I miss you,
I'm happy or I'm Blue.
I need your arms to comfort me,
For no one else will do.
I need someone to hold my hand,
To whisper sweet words as you do.
Someone I can depend on,
Why can't that someone be you .
Hold me & love me,
Long for me through the night.
Kiss me & make love to me,
Make all between us right.
Rest your head upon my chest,
Stay here where you belong.
Tell me darling that you need me too,
That our love can't be wrong.
Repeat chorus:
Someone I can depend on,
Why can't that someone be you.
Good Morning Rose,
I would love to hear your love songs
they are beautifully spoken/written
I need to hug someone now :)
ok here's a hug for you :)
Much Love & Hugzz
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
I love it.Poems can indeed be turned into great songs and you have demonstrated that.I like how the words flow into the poem/song.Keep up the good work
I've always felt that some of the best poets were the ones who wrote wonderful lyrics that we sing for generations. Of course the music helps a lot too.
This poem/songs says so much and the words are easy to sing and remember, I have one suggestion though dear Cus...like the title drop the "dear" from the last line in the chorus. I know it rhymnes with ear but if you let it drift off you won't need it and I think it brings it all into the title. Love it though.
hugs
Fee
Rose, your way with words makes music to any piece of writing. This is truly beautiful and I enjoyed it much! I love the romance needed in this write...it one where one says, "Tell me darling that you need me too...that our love can't be wrong." Oh, how good this is.
Yes its true Rose poems become a song
And this lyrics have the sound of
A love song
Your visuals are superb
I can actually hear the melody!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugsss...Morning Star
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I would love to hear your love songs
they are beautifully spoken/written
I need to hug someone now :)
ok here's a hug for you :)
Much Love & Hugzz
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Yups, you've got a great song here, Rose.
And you do them so well.
Love it.
Smile--RaeLynn
I truly believe that; keep on penning both poems and songs!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I'd love to hear it on the radio;)...ET
Edwin
hugs
Fee
And this lyrics have the sound of
A love song
Your visuals are superb
I can actually hear the melody!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugsss...Morning Star
Blessings,
Joyce B.