AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Michael Gorton, iTrennis Killian, iJudith Bailey, iStephen Murray, iAlvin Romer, iMary Lynn Plaisance, iScott Zachary, iPatricia Hilliard, iTichaona Chinyelu, iMORGAN ST. JAMES, i

  Home > Philosophy > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Axilea MU

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· 285 Titles
· 3,942 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Nov, 2006

Axilea MU, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



On A Cliff's Edge
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

- ... there's a statue -


Poem Artwork

"There is something you don't know,
something about me,
a woman who walks, chooses, prays
and holds her future
in her sunburned hands..."

Can you picture a statue
covered with moss,
eroded by the wind of time?

She'd show the ravaged completion
of things and beings
that have the power
of merely existing.

Take a walk on the cliff's edge
and watch that hazel lizard
slither on the flaky rock.

Behold the majestic figure,
while the ivy creeps upon her
as she stands in hieratic solitude.

See how she holds her breath,
avoiding life's servitude,
dominating from the top of her world.

Imagine the old stone -
heated by the afternoon sun -
that had once been smooth,
polished to perfection.

Begin to understand
how she is quietly trapped, corroded
by the beautiful tediousness
of unexplored possibilities.

I agree, her eyes are empty,
yet she's begging to be delivered
from this grave
of soulless splendor.

"...Now you know why
I will never again
stand helplessly motionless
on the edge of my life."

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "On A Cliff's Edge"
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
We all dance on the edge, some of us fall off while others manage to balance their lives..
Peace, Love, and Light,

Amber "V"

Reviewed on November 5, 2007
This is excellently penned, Axilea; stirs the imagination and makes them grateful they stepped to the edge of the cliff with you. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
You captured the woman in the mist looking back at life through a veil of uncertainty until she realized that regrets are worth nothing but hope is a true asset. Very well done. Impressive.

Fee

Reviewed on November 5, 2007
This composition strikes imagination and makes this reader see a full length motion picture on the screen... "On A Cliff's Edge" bears everything that makes a poem eternal.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
I was going to write a comment here, but it turned into a poem (sort of) so I put it in my den instead.
This poem is very inspiring. --Charlie


New Poetry by Axilea MU
Popular Poetry (Philosophy)
  1.  Value of Humility
  2.  Rainbow-Song 2025 (Part 3)
  3.  Accepting Yourself
  4.  heavvy fogg
  5.  Float Your Boat
  6.  What Do I Want?
  7.  Until....
  8.  Falling Off the Mountain
  9.  Land of the Living
  10.  Houses of Cards
  11.  Uncounted
  12.  Footprints in the Snow
  13.  Chapters
  14.  Who I Am
  15.  The 'Voice of Reason' Contends...
  16.  The Fugitive Facets of Being (Faith)
  17.  Power
  18.  Different
  19.  The Dabbler
  20.  Sidewalk Chalk Drawings {for Emma}
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Transcendental Sojourn-Arrival to One Journal by Liz Cosline

Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about. You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached. Deciding what is the core of belief.  
Member BookAds

Transcendental Sojourn-Arrival to One Journal by Liz Cosline

Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about. You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached. Deciding what is the core of belief.  
Member BookAds

Free Download - Issues in Ethics by Sam Vaknin

Issues in ethics - the right to life, cloning, abortion, animal rights and other controversial topics.  
Member BookAds