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MOLT!
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- An adult that needs to grow -


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Turn around,
she wants to see you
so that she can tell
the drought and famine,
the feeling of damage
by the way you look at her.

Brown spots,
rotting arthropods,
she knows that you are in pain.
Hiding is not necessary,
leave your burrow straightaway
and face fresh streams of truth.

With eyes like X-rays,
there's so much she can tell.
Alas, you have no skeleton,
your skin sticking to an outer shell,
you spend your day in a swamp
with a carapace that's sleepy gray.

It is time to molt
- grow inside today -
just evolve, breathe, work, reform
until (maybe) you give up your shell:
hardening bones and softening heart
before she has a change of mood.

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 Reviews of "MOLT!"
Reviewed on November 14, 2007

This made me feel my heart boiling and pumping wisdom.
"MOLT!" teaches and polishes the tools of humanity.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Hira Sadhak
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
A very touching poem, quite mature in thought and expression, would be happy if can be in touch the author
Hira Sadhak

Reviewed on November 13, 2007
Wow! This poem is Awesome!
WE all should care!
and not hide...
Life is a circle, as we circle our journey!
Glad I read you Axilea
YOur message speaks in volumes!
You are very creative with your expressions and metaphors!
Warm hugs, Warrior Gypsy Purple Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!Write On!
I hope you step foot in my corner of the den again, I enjoy your deep fine inspirations!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
Funny, just now seeing this after "release." Ditto on the comments below Axilea.
clr

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
We all hide beneath our outer shell, protecting our hearts from pain and sorrow..
Great write, I enjoyed it.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
Super,
Axilea. Love the strength and rhythm. And, the message, yes yes, the message!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
Interesting study of what seems so simple yet like humanity can be a veritable mystery of life.

Fee

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
Yea, but you've got a back bone, and you have to do dishes! --Charlie

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
A thought provoking write,sometimes avoiding pain is the greater fear,survival
stan

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
At times one finds themselves within a shell, not wishing or having the desire to evolve...there is more to life than hiding within oneself to only share the passing of time...your thoughts express a view of growth and rejuvenation upon breaking free from the shell...

nice work...

Art Sun...


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