I sit on the sofa,
My feet up,
Greedily slurping up
A pint of Ben and Jerrys,
Happy in the moment
And carefree in a way
That I seldom am,
When my mother,
Now dead for three years,
Creeps into my mind,
Reminding me
Of my promise
To her on her deathbed
To work on my weight
(Now 200 pounds in excess);
I smart back
(As I often did)
That I am,
Then slurp another spoonful
In stubborn rebellion;
And I feel her sadness
Which immediately robs me
Of the pleasure
I had seconds ago
Been enjoying;
So I say good-bye
To the remainder of the pint
Before pitching it in the garbage;
And after a while
I quietly thank her
For bringing me to my senses.
After all,
Mom was always right.
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Reviews of "Mom Was Always Right"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2010
Wonderful writing sweet lady have a wonderful day and be safe..Hugsss
Gorgeous in so many ways ~
How it flows beautifully too!
Blessings,
Christine
ps (I eat ice cream all the time too, and I have to try to keep on the non-fat frozen yogurt which tastes about as good!)
It's almost Christmas. Lynn Basil is writing her last book about a secret entrance into the magical doll land of Sha Bebe that she loves so much. Bagannos have taken over the world! Lynn finally meets her dolls in real life. Can she write in a Secret
How it flows beautifully too!
Blessings,
Christine
ps (I eat ice cream all the time too, and I have to try to keep on the non-fat frozen yogurt which tastes about as good!)