And what shall I now write, of thee
Of love once known then lost?
What shall I pen in dark poetry?
We have paid the unbearable cost
How many tears have fallen down
From eyes consumed with pain
How many hopes fallen to the ground
‘Ner to raise their heads again
For beauty was bought with sorrow
And grief was pleasure’s reward
No relief shall be mine on the morrow
Only the constant piercing of sword
For having loved too much and well
And of living dreams in death lying still
Upon my soul deep scars I bear
Upon my bed oft I toss and turn
I find you neither here nor there
Will my fire for you forever burn?
Deep in my thoughts you yet stay
My heart is still your home
And no remedy seems to drive away
The memories that should be gone
What shall I write of thee today
With bloody ink of wounded heart?
What shall I say of reverie
That stays but should depart?
Life must go on and so must I
Perhaps on the morrow to no longer cry
Most beautiful sonnet La Belle...a keepr for sure!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
A beautiful sonnet, very touching write La Belle, hope this isn't happening to you now...as always I have enjoyed your writtings and this one is making me cry :-( Best wishes to you, Hugs, Peggy
Bravo sweety, as always reelin with feelin. But be carefull hun, when we put emotions into words it can actually give them strength that can linger for days, week's...
I still find it hard to believe the transformation of styles...and am in awe of the the beauty you capture in your writing even in the sadder tragic pieces of longing such as this. You are the queen of artistic romance.
Amor
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Has the feel of a Shakespearean write. Classic beauty in the romance you pen, La Belle. Lydi**
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Two sonnets in one. Makes me think of Ophelia, in Hamlet.
Beaut write, letting him in but with a price to pay...
But your romance is like banks of water wanting to burst,
then love rising, with such feelings..
Exquisite...Haunting music, Says yes...Burn...Stay strong...Burn bright... For love is heart light...Lovely work. Inspiring words.I hope you are well. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful work.Jen
Sweet Sissy! When I see you hurtin like this, over that damn man I wanna SLAP THE WATER OUTTA HIM! He aint worthy of you! We need to cast a hurt spell on the little chit! He aint worth no more of yore precious tears! I LOVE YOU! Sissy
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Love Tinka
Amor
Beaut write, letting him in but with a price to pay...
But your romance is like banks of water wanting to burst,
then love rising, with such feelings..
Now, if'n I can just stop laughing at SC's review I'll get back to the business of crying....
Walt
Peace,
Dan
As long as there is poetry; as long as there is romance; as long as there is hope, your words will forever burn. Beautifully penned; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.