Ghost Outside Your Door (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

The strength in this poem is an inspiration to all women who have ever been through this. Wish I'd had it 28 years ago to serve as a tangible reminder of my strength. Thank you!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Ruth Whiskie (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2008

I absolutely love the structure of your poem. It makes a strong visual impact even before the words are read. I am not sure, however, if really conjures the image of a ghost. I get the feeling of something mirrored or reflected in water.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 24, 2008

I love the way you constructed this maginificent piece and as fictitious as this is it does hold true for many to relate to. Beautiful work.
Love
Amor

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 24, 2008

Belle,

Sad and hauntingly beautiful write. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2008

Very nice writing sweet lady,take care..Hugssss

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Poignant and sad. Well penned.

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Tender words Belle. A meloncholy mood from you and the world goes dim, I shall light a votive for you that belches aromatic splender strong enough to redeem even ghosts. ;(

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Stunning work...
Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Very insightful offering....you are a strong woman!!

Love Tnka

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

Belle,
This is surely intense, hope you are well, and you do something for your spirit. Lifted spirits lend new beginnings..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "Vivianna"

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 23, 2008

...aura of suspended spirit...emotions garment perhaps worn...seen through a closed door...pushed.
well written sensitive style La Belle...
John

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

you can see right through the heart of this ghost ... powerfully emotive, La Belle ...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

To have and have not, such sentimentality and the tugging of emotions, all captured well....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

Well put Belle -loved the shape of your waterfall one and this hourglass figure is surely yours? Timing - mine is lousy :(

:o) Nicky xx

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

Beautiful, sad and poignant at the same time...ah yes those ghosts

Carole~

Reviewed by Selene Skye

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

We all have those ghosties. Your spinerette embodies grace and beauty dealing with this theme. Usually it is expressed with anger.
Beautifully written and expressed!

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

wow-for anyone to reject a la Belle they need their head examined--the ghosts as well, I believe hang like cold stars in our memory banks for a long time-excellent!!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

Those that did know rejection will read this lines with a little of despair coming back...then, the poem is the first step to forget.

Georg

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

Very well done . . . I know about those ghosts . . . I live with one every day of my life . . .

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

La Belle,

Stunning form and write - haunting, poignant excellence - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on February 22, 2008

Poignant and artistically displayed. Nice work.