Vacant Garden Bench (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

This is one of the most heartwrenching goodbye poems I have ever read. "You don't know where I walk" sums it up for me. Excellently done, master. Liz

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

when the path forks two ways
we endure the agony of never

So very sad, La Belle.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Belle,

Very melancholy and emotonally write. You've pulled the strings of my heart with this one. Your a very captivating writer my friend and always a pleasure to read. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 22, 2008

Maybe he was waiting sitting on the wrong bench in the wrong park, asking himself why...why she didn't came?...
Life is so unfair sometime, playing with people's destiny, making the to miss each other when they were so made for each other, and instead make them to bump into someone that will make their pitiful lives yet more pitiful with a lot of what ifs...

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Solemn, yet beautiful photograph! "It's too late for you to follow" pretty well sums up this marvelous piece, yet it contains a sadness that seems to linger....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Ah! This is a beautiful story of one who has finally let go and decides to move on, to move foward

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

He missed his chance to have a great woman
Lovely poem La Belle..
Love ya!
Ron

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Beautiful Photo of emotion a Belle,
and so is your poetic expression in this tear jerking write!
Love he Best Thing In The World. But the pain we all are embraced in memories with this write.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

The extreme emotions here are often those I've felt. Some people/lovers are so very selfish that they don't absorb the love stretched out before them. What a sad commentary when love is one sided and blind.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Sad too late people realize what they miss...

Fee

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

This is sad and touched me deelpy too. In a way the message goes out to all and is needed by all to read for their futures and living in the now. Thanks for this poem from your heart. I must read it over to get more meaning from it.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

too many tears can't write. Love this and it touched me deeply. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

Poignantly penned, can barely see for the tears rolling down my face - you know how to squeeze the heart, La Belle. Your poetry reaches deep - excellent.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on April 21, 2008

My heart is filled with sadness as I read this. Reminds of when my first marriage ended ... tragic. Yet, the road traveled alone is better than traveling with a 'bad' companion.

God bless you. Kathy