you broke it, you totally shattered it
and then you completely crushed it
with hateful sarcastic words
only worried about you
and your feelings
never mine
never mine
always someone else’s
still blaming me, as usual
i won’t take your false blame
i bear no blame, look in the mirror
at the one who broke all his promises
how could i ever have loved you at all?
i believed those lies and held back
nothing of my heart and soul
you had all of me so long
i truly adored you
you lying fake
only a big fake
who lived in two worlds
real one i was never invited into
and the dream one you built with me
look in the mirror, and just think about this
in life or dreams you will never find such love again
YOU got it goin' on BElle!
His Loss! but I feel the pain here, and Not sure if this is
just an Excellent heartbreakin' poem for your books or next book!
Love is a give and take!
Your style of this poem in most intriguing as well! GREAT job, as usual my friend!Glad I didn't miss it!
LET THE HEaLING begiN!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
Very rich in emotional feeling as you bring down the hammer on a great pretender of love.
well done
Fee
Reviewed by Misty Blue (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
sometimes its easier to lay blame on the other than to look into the mirror and see the truth for what it is. The fake he is. Sad poem. His lost, not yours.
Strong and very powerful, he wasn't worthy enough to have you, your beautiful soul is worth more, find your strength, chalk it up as experience and move on life is to short to waste on the past, great write here, take care Valerie
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His Loss! but I feel the pain here, and Not sure if this is
just an Excellent heartbreakin' poem for your books or next book!
Love is a give and take!
Your style of this poem in most intriguing as well! GREAT job, as usual my friend!Glad I didn't miss it!
LET THE HEaLING begiN!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo
STay Positive!
Ed
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Karla. :(
excellently portrayed
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
well done
Fee
Georg