Fear (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

This is a good write and a experience of the past. The geatest force in the universe is love and nothing or no one can destroy it! My whole world was turned upside down but because I love sincerely with my whole heart like yourself we shall know love again. The Lord will send us someone worthy of our love! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on April 9, 2009

Fear like anything else has it's place and must be kept under control. The first step is always to find the source of something to resolve it. Good write.

Stay well and keep writing

Ed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

once we learn to control our fear we develop the power to control it ... sad, powerful poem La Belle ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

Fear is a terrible place to live, one must release fear and replace it with hope and joy. To live in fear is to live as a prisoner of their own existence. I only pray that this is not about you.
It is good to see you on the den again, please don't be away so long.
Much love, light and peace dear Belle,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara

Reviewed on April 4, 2009

True so true, yet one day those walls will crumble! Fear is the destroyers of heart, mind and soul that leaves one walking through life with blinders on, blind to see they are their own worst enemy.

Photo and music befitting of these words poignantly, truthfully well writ!

Nicole

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

FEAR! lotta that goin rown dees days, now any good guru's that won't soak ya. ;)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Admiting our fears are the first steps to overcoming it. Well done, Red Lady

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Emotional and haunting thoughts you penned...learning to trust again is the hard part. excellent job

Carole~

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

That is the begining of healing "But I�m unafraid to finally admit it" Brilliant and haunting write

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Heartrending write, Belle; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers! Powerfully penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Sad and beautiful POEM!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Sometimes people treat people like they were just dolls hanging on strings to do what the puppeteer master's whims wanted to, disregarding feelings and pain given because the master is counting, take it for granted that fear will hold the doll in line and under his thumb.
But, people living in fear can sometimes when it has been for so long, rebel, raise up and using the same string that were holding it bringing down the puppeteer with the mighty strength born from hate.

Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

LaBelle we all feel that way once our heart has been shattered. It took me seven years to let myself accept the love Fred had to offer me, thank God above for giving me what it took to trust my heart with him. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

great teaching in the ways of fear...one doesn't have to always be the victim! we choose.

(love this song too)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

Powerfully penned, La Belle, I hope this isn't your reality. You write, convincingly - well done.

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

LaBelle,
Very real, all too real, in emotion, but as Regis says honest and therefore cathartic. This is well said.
John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

Sad but honest and real and therefore empowering and freeing; thank you, Belle. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

so well expressed-fear is so debilitating

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

Well written Belle. Very sad; but you need to take down those walls. True happiness does await you but you need to let it find you. God bless.

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

The writing is beautifully done; altho I do think that many "young" people go thru this in the beginning...then they must realize that they have to stay up about themselves...there will be another...and hopefully he/she will be the "one".... This disappointment happens all thru the ages...so your words are valid in many ways... Glad to see you posting! hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

Great pen Belle, but throwing up defences will only keep someone true from finding the real you. And a real treasure they'll find. Take care.