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Fireworks of Pain
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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My Fibromyalgia's acting up BIG time. Keep me in your prayers--

I hope your July 4th holiday is safe, pain free, and fun. :-)


Poem Artwork

"FIREWORKS OF PAIN"

Never ending, these fireworks of pain
The kind that explode again and again
O, what I'd give to gain independence
From Fibromyalgia's pain, so immense

Detonating from my neck to my feet
The kind of pain that repeats and repeats
Sparklers going off in front of my eyes
Adding to color I see in the skies

An eagle tears muscles with wicked claws
The kind that intensifies, there's no pause
Wish I could amputate body from head
No...I have to live with the pain, instead

The finale draws near, but not the end
The kind where many fireworks will blend
They congeal until I'm burning inside
I burst into flame but I have not died

Never ending, these fireworks of pain
The kind that explode again and again
O, what I'd give to gain independence
From Fibromyalgia's pain, so intense

(C) Copy written, July 2, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Fireworks of Pain"
Reviewed by Robin Spicer
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Hi karla. I can understand this from two points of view. Mt wife suffers greatly from "Fibro", and I have chronic pain from degenerative osteo arthritis, which helps me to help Juanita.
You have captured the intensity, and the fears, that come with Fibro extremely well in this work. You write from the heart.

((((Hugs))))
Robin

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Sounds agonizing, indeed, Karla. Truly hope you are soon feeling better, and can enjoy the Holiday. Our prayers are with you.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 3, 2004
Bittersweet but yet another beautiful write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
I wish you a painless July 4th celebration and that is only the begining :-)

Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Your in my prayers Karla
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Pain pain go away give it to the coward president of Spain.

Heart breaking write.

In prayers big time...xx

Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Sorry it is acting up and causing the pain.
Very interesting how you related this with the holiday.
Have a safe weekend
Tommy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
I am thinking positive here for you Karla, "NO PAIN, NO PAIN"! Keep yourself strong, as I know you will, and enjoy the 4th or whatever day it is you are off from work...Peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Love the way you married the two Karla.Superb!
I hope the fourth finds you free to enjoy it!
I'll keep you in prayer!

Reviewed by Judith Pleasant
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Karla,
I can relate. I had a big FM flare up from over doing, last night and today. We just have to stay positive and take it easier, that somewhat helps to ease the. My prayers are with you.
Happy 4th.
Blessings,
Judith

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Karla, really well-written piece. You capture the excruciating pain. I'm so sorry you have to experience it... Best, Dawn

Reviewed on July 2, 2004
(((Karla)))

OW! This one made me hurt! LOVED the imagery and anology you used in this heartfelt and honest poem! BRAVA; well done! Sure hope that the pain lessens for you; I HATE to see you hurting! A most excellent poem!

(((HUGS))) and love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Loved the pic; pretty! Happy July Fourth to you; may the fireworks be bright for you!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
Wonderfully honest and refreshing self analysis of affliction .
Beautiful and bittersweet Karla
Peter Paton


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