Thank you for reading all of my poems. You encourage, inspire and bless me with your prayers and friendship. I am truly honored you consider me, "Poet."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "BIRTH OF A POEM"
The poem was without form, In darkness, No rhyme, Void! Words are birthed in sudden storms, There is blood, And pain, Breath! They blink in the glaring light, A heartbeat, Meter, LIFE! Precious in the Poet's sight, Newborn sounds, Visions, Dreams! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (C) Copy written, September 26, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
Your poems were born when you were born to AD, and we are all thankful to have known you and congrats on numero one thousandO, LOL! Peace dear friend, eD & Rufuz
in Buddhism, a breath of god is two thousand years ...1000 years, god inhales the next thousand god exhales ... when god exhales the universe expands and creates itself again ... this poem is a breath of creation, it exhales a sigh of truth within us ...
May You live a long healthy life and may You create and write a hundred thousand more poems, and may the world pay the accolades due to You.
I congratulate You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2004
1,000! Wow, incredible accomplishment Karla...good thing the labor of poetry doesn't leave stretch marks! but then again, maybe they do where they just don't show...grin.
Karla...Highly original and creative theme....
Yes..Congratulations on reaching the 1,000 mark indeed...
may your golden quill always produce quality and inspiration to all..
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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I only have about 890 to go hee hee, excellent poem, Keep on, never stop your golden quill, your work is amazing Karla.
warm hugs and love your friend in SA.
Elga
Dave
Another perfect new born!!
Love Tinka
I congratulate You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Amy
gee i sort of have the same experience creating a poem, except for the blood part! lolol
pax A
you are getting better by the syllable!
There should be an award on The Den for such an accomplishment.
You put some deep thought into this one!
TRASK
Becca
Reindeer
Congrats on your thousandth poem, may we see 1,000 x 1,000 more...
God Bless
Michelle~
Yes..Congratulations on reaching the 1,000 mark indeed...
may your golden quill always produce quality and inspiration to all..
Love and best wishes..
Peter
Congrats on reaching the 1,000 mark; may you have 1,000 more--and BEYOND!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D