Don't dwell on the negatives. Remember the positives. And let the healing begin. :-)
"TINY STARS OF GOLD"
I discovered stars in the attic of my brain I wondered how long they were there It seemed like they had been there a very long time Just dreaming to be found and shared ~ I cleaned off the accumulated years of dirt They'd rarely seen the light of day They'd been pocketed in hidden convolutions And the key had been thrown away ~ Abandoned, forgotten, these tiny stars of gold Buried by memories of pain I took them out and surrounded myself with love And let healing tears fall like rain ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (C) Copy written, 18 October, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
A wonderful poem Karla. I love this one, all of us should search our attics!
Beautiful imagery in this uplifting poem; love the message in this! May your muse continue to soar higher and higher, and may your talent continue to shine like the Northern Lights! Well done, Karla; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
EXCEPTIONAL! In this world that seems determined to bombard us with the negative, while beauty is all around, I found this wonderfully uplifting and inspirational...thank you.
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
This one made me cry!!
You are a brilliant Star Karla!!
Love Tinka
Your goodness and light shine brightly in this highly original piece...
Peter
God Bless
Michelle~
TRASK
You surpassed yourself with this one!;-)
Exceptional rhythm & verse - sensational write, my friend!!
Robert
Beautiful imagery in this uplifting poem; love the message in this! May your muse continue to soar higher and higher, and may your talent continue to shine like the Northern Lights! Well done, Karla; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D