When I pen a poem, a fragment or phrase (rarely an entire write) will come to me. Today's was
"I sat down to write a poem."
Sometimes, the entire poem will gel; other times, I have to work with it (and sometimes it won't come at all).
Today was a good day. :-) This is the result. It does not necessarily express how I feel about writing. :-) (Although there are times...especially when I read y'all's poetry...JAYS!) LOL
"I WANTED TO"
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something brilliant and educational, but what I wrote sounded dumb.
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something that held great beauty and meaning, but the words came out ugly.
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something that would have touched the face of God, but my words were not worthy.
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something that would forever change the world, but the words were resistant.
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something that would have brought peace to the land, but my words started a war.
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something to clear up any confusion, but the words got in the way.
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something that would forever change the world but my words were resistant.
I sat down to write a poem. I wanted to write something but have forgotten what it was... the words were not important.
(C) Copy written, 13 March, 2005, by Karla Dorman.
Sis, this is very true of most of us who write (giggles). Sometimes the words just flow, sometimes the words jut glow and seem to pen themselves, sometime they are impoosible words, without reason or rhyme, and this too can make for good writing. I have had writer's block a lot of tiems, and then I just sit back, take a little nap, and start fresh when I wake up. This is a very good poem of truth and struggle. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
Hell, It's the 13th, but not Friday, and nothing comes out right on a 13th. Try again on another day..... and celebrate. I enjoyed your words - composed for all your fellow bumpkins who sit down and try, and try, and try some more. Ain't we a bunch of wierdoits? - Your loyal fan - Bill
We all have moments like this, Karla. Sometimes I think it is just best to put the poem to bed and come back to it later. You are a fine writer, Karla, if you don't write one today, the world won't stop revolving. Tomorrow you will probably pen a masterpiece.
Take care,
Sherry
I want to, too...sometimes three times or more a day, but damn I am only human and getting old at that...LOL! ED
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2005
I think that you did yourself proud on this one. Sometimes I do find myself wondering just what effect my poems have on people. I posted a poem Violets In The Snow on a site and got a nasty email telling me to stop writing and that I had no right to post anything anywhere. That does bug me but then I realize the person has not really accomplished anything. But we do write things sometimes that we look at and say did I really write that. However your works never cease to be nothing short of good.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2005
I sat down to write a poem.
I wanted to write something
that would forever change the world,
but the words were resistant.
You could have said. Men are braver than women.
Ok, ok, ok, We know it's not true, but if it were it would change the world.
Or
My boy friends pregnant.
That could work.
But if you told the truth..
Ed K is Jack the Ripper.
WOW, what a great end to the mystery, you would have solved...
Don't EVER doubt your capabilities as a writer. We all have our own unique style, and I happen to think you are worthy to be published or read! You are a dynamic poet who writes deep from the heart and soul, and I am honored to read your poems! You continue to get better and better, and you shouldn't be so hard on yourself! You are one of the best here, and more people should read your works of art! That is exactly what your poems are!! and you exude with talent; don't EVER think otherwise!! BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and biggest fan!), karen lynn. :D
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
You sat down and penned, a thought provoking write, so keep penning Karla, your words are always worthy, and your desire so well reflected, well done.
warm hugs
Elga Your friend in SA
Love from India - Joel -
Love Tinka
God Bless
Michelle!
You Gotta Get Offffffffffffffffffffffff That Merry Go Round...
TRASK
etw
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Take care,
Sherry
i know that feeling
somedays i can write what i will
somedays not
ah, the joys of poetry
oneof which is reaing
your work, ma'dear
good write
love
john+
I wanted to write something
that would forever change the world,
but the words were resistant.
You could have said. Men are braver than women.
Ok, ok, ok, We know it's not true, but if it were it would change the world.
Or
My boy friends pregnant.
That could work.
But if you told the truth..
Ed K is Jack the Ripper.
WOW, what a great end to the mystery, you would have solved...
Don't EVER doubt your capabilities as a writer. We all have our own unique style, and I happen to think you are worthy to be published or read! You are a dynamic poet who writes deep from the heart and soul, and I am honored to read your poems! You continue to get better and better, and you shouldn't be so hard on yourself! You are one of the best here, and more people should read your works of art! That is exactly what your poems are!! and you exude with talent; don't EVER think otherwise!! BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and biggest fan!), karen lynn. :D