~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ There is an infinity of words within poems waiting to be born; they're attached by umbilical cords throbbing with creativity's ink.
At the end of the third trimester, the poem moves into position; held firm by place by contracting thought, which will guide the words out of the pen.
The poet cries out in her struggle; nothing worthwhile is without pain; suddenly, there's a rush of fluid; a newly born poem comes to life.
The moment is forever captured when they are guided to sheets of white; the poet laughs as the tiny words make a permanent mark on the page. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ (C) Copy written, 14 March, 2005, by Karla Dorman.
First class. It shows your lyric talent. Keep them like this and then, too, try as many Senryus as can. Those I have read are very much a genre of your own.
Hey Karla - Dang, I needed that! Thanks much for putting these thoughts and convictions into an understandable creation. But, yours is almost grown, and soon to be on its own! ! ! - Bill
May your days be filled with laughter as well as with so many tiny words making permanent marks on reams of paper, as "New Born Poems" appear. A superb write Karla.
OMG sis, you have captured the purest poetic writing style. the words are conceived in the poets mind, and the in the third trimester the miracle of poetic birth occurs. I like this one sis, it is touching to the soul. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
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Pearl
Love and blessings
This was writing at it's best. The best description of writing I've read so far. Excellent work.
Sherry
Conratulations ... and may you have many "children".
Blessings,
Joseph
Metaphorically superb; beautifully written my friend ... wonderful!!
Blessings,
Robert
This is fantastic; one of your best (and all of your poems are good!)! BRAVA on a beautiful, inspiring write; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Take care,
Sherry
Hugs, Carole
Love Tinka
This is an excellent write, I believe one of my favorite pieces from you...
God Bless
Michelle!
outstanding poem ...
the page with her ink of poetic passion. Kudo's!
etw
your bestest yet !!!!!!!!
love
j+
May your days be filled with laughter as well as with so many tiny words making permanent marks on reams of paper, as "New Born Poems" appear. A superb write Karla.
warm hugs
Elga Your friend in SA
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