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Trip
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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*Grins*


Poem Artwork

Psychedelic fragments of verse
Play amidst the rainbows:
And multi-colored thoughts
Piroette to a rhythmic beat--

The Poet and her brain converse
In frantic communion:
What is real, what is not
Is this stuff legal on the street--

O, what the hell, the Poet writes
The colors that she hears:
The words bloom vividly
As they're written across the page--

She places them within the lights
And goes behind the scene:
A Reader wanders by
The manuscript left on the stage--

The Reader then becomes immersed
Within the Poet's mind:
The words, now a poem
The Poet's trip is now complete--

(C) Copy written, 23 March, 2005, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Trip"
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
I agree, you are getting better and better...good write

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
As we say kindly, in Georgia - "Girl, you're a real trip!" Your compostion is delightful and different - telling so vividly how a great poem begins and end in your mind. Whatatrip! - Bill

Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Another excellent write Karla, keep em coming
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Hi sis, I enjoyed reading this very much, and I agree with everyone here when I say, you DO get better and better as you keep writing. But I don't know how much better you can get tho, because you are already very good. I love your poems, and I am way behind in readin most of them. Like when I am done here, I need to lie down as I am getting very dizzy again. May the Lord bw ith you, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((((((((((((((((MANY, MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSS))))))))))))))))))))))))))))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Like I said, better and better. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
karla you are exceeding your own dreams;-)
Going to ever higher levels, reaching
celestial heights;-) Brava! Splendid poetry!

etw

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
You get better, and better with time. I don't know how you do it. I have to say that this one is a trip in deed into the muse of verses.
Excellent write, Karla

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
You just getting better and Better Karla!!

Masterfully done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
well done

Reviewed on March 23, 2005
(((Karla)))

Your poetic skills continue to improve with each and every write you do! I love how your writing has taken off in new and unexpected ways; keep up the awesome work! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
i agree, your poems are evolving and i like the direction you are going

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
I have to agree with everybody and add this: Your poetry has taken on ann edge you never had before. I can't define this edge, but it is there and it is vibrant. Keep it. Hone it. Explore it.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Karla, you poems are becoming prettier and prettier.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Wonderful=0).

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
Karla,

This is one of your best ... an amazing write!

Love, Light, Joy & Creativity,
Joseph


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