Read Me Who Has Become The Poem (Revised, Reposted) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

Wow Karla! Very impressive
indeed! I do not think I got
a chance to read the first one.
Yet, this one, well Blow me away!
BRAVA!
Love ya!
Becca P Lang

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

Karla,

Outstanding poetic work - poetess c'est magnifique!!

Blessings my friend,

Robert

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

"read me who has become the poem"
Wow! that's a great line and a
awesome poem it is.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

i lay naked before you

That's what good poetry is all about - and this is a very good poem, Karla!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

Karla,

This poem is a Masterpiece ... Congratulations!

Peace Be With You,
Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

YEEES!!!!! That's what poetry's all about, Karla! The glorious and loving fusion of the appreciation, trust and understanding of both writer and reader together... poetry doesn't happen fully UNTIL the two come together in a glorious interaction! Thanks for sharing your wonderful inner and outer self with us and for fuelling our hearts and kindling our inspiration with the wonder that is "You"... and that is "Us" when combined with it! Magnifico!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

Well written Kala!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

Outstanding write, you touched the core with this one....great job!!

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

indeed, you are a living poem ... it is evident in this very captivating and inspired poem ... great job of it!

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

"read me who has become the poem" is an absolutely wonderful line. Thanks for reposting. I'm a newbie and would never have seen your beautiful line otherwise. Henry

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

Most Interestingly So Concept!

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

A masterful poet wrote this poem, and did it with superb
command of the written word! Take a bow Karla, and enjoy
the kudo's!!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

Beautiful, beautiful poem. I especially like the last verse

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 12, 2005

(((Karla)))

Excellent write; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D