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Final Request
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Wrap my body in shrouds of poetry
for it was faithful and never laughed or
pointed fingers at my lack of talent
and never threw my words down on the floor -
It accepted me as the Poet I
dreamed of becoming and supported me
through all of the highs and lows of writing ,
teaching me on what it was to be free -
With laughing streamers of meter and rhyme
I fished for the right word to use in seas
of poetic brilliance and hoped for a
miracle or two that would come in threes -
As long as there was a pen in my hand ,
it stepped back and watched me with growing pride
as I flung the words into existance
with my Muse who was along for the ride -
And the ride is coming to a stop now
and there is one request before I die :
wrap my body in shrouds of poetry ,
it deserves to be recognized - not I .

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Final Request"
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2005
Excellent request! And it shall be done! But I must differ with your opinion of yourself for my dear your muse is You!! So you Both need to be recognized as the true brilliant ones that you are!! xo!! and so therefore and heretowith if I am the one to see that your final request be carried out as wished I will have to do the request as it should be done. (c :)honoring YOU and your muse!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Do you not read The Forese, Karla?! The Poem and the Poet are one! Can't have one without the other, but sometimes it IS difficult to know who's boss! Your poetry is only in existance because YOU write it... I nearly posted Natasha Bedingfield's song "Unwritten" whole the other day: she says it all: "Feel the rain on your skin, no one else can feel it for you - only you can let it in! No one else can speak the words on your lips. Drench yourself in words unspoken, live your life with arms wide open, TODAY is where your book begins - the rest is still unwritten". Thanks Nat, and thank YOU Karla, Light of the Den! :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Woah! This one bowled me over! This is a keeper - definitely reminiscent of some of the classicist poetry of days gone by. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Beautiful, Karla!

Peace.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 25, 2005
Most powerful write sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Dark and beautiful Karla!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
a mighty fine dark write

peace

Reviewed on May 24, 2005
This is a great write
God Bless
Michelle1

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Dark write, babe, but it sure says a great deal about you and your poetry...and no, that is NO, YOU ARE NOT LEAVING US YET!!! Ed

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Love the theme. Very creative.

Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Dark, but wonderous use of poetry saluting poetry in your life. Great work. Henry

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Excellent write... you have spoken the truth of everyone, if we most go, please keep our words alive...

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
If ya' ain't in too big a hurry to go, I'll agree with every word, and will ask for the cubicle right next to yours and other true believers. Bless your poetic heart, Sweet Lady, you do tell it like it is! - Bill

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Well this one does just shine Karla and I suppose we should all wish this.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
A poet shines throughout this write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
A fantastic poem, that captures the essence of all poets
and you will be among them eternally!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Telling it like it is, that's for sure. All we can hope for is that our words will survive us. Very dynamic and insightful piece of your soul wrapped up in this poem.

Reviewed on May 24, 2005
(((Karla)))

Powerful read; I hope you don't ever stop writing! You have a gift that needs to be shared with the world, and you only get better and better! Well done, Poet! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 24, 2005
Karla don't you dare think that way, your poetry will live on for sure but you are not to give in to the dark forces, too many people here on the den still need to hear your words. Hugs,
Felix


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