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Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Famine
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The oven sun bakes
what little moisture remains
from the hardpack land;

locusts decimate
the vegetation that once
knew the taste of rain;

flies congregate on
the faces of skeletons,
seeking nourishment;

disease runs rampant,
taking as many lives as
the lack of food does;

hope for the future
is buried time and again,
one death at a time;

bellies cry out for
nourishment and clean water
that never arrives;

and a nation starves
under the observing eyes
of the ignorant.


(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

 

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 Reviews of "Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Famine"
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2005
Dear Karla,

You do not cover your eyes
and pretend that this reality
does not exist.

Your poetry gives voice
to those cries that are pleading
to be heard.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed on August 4, 2005
I entirely agree with Jude, dear friend: Consciousness needs to evolve more, and with it, our inner sense of responsibility and concentration of energies towards change from wrong to right, from unbalanced to harmonious growth. This haiku chain, and the image you illustrate and complete it with, are heart-wrenching and deeply painful to consider, yet, no soul can remain apathetic before the cruel reality they depict. There are great crimes allowed by the indifference of intentional ignorance... and conceivably, greater ones perpetrated by corruption and greed.
May your attentive, generous, and loving soul be blessed and heeded.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2005
Profoud!!!
saved this one..
Thankyou so much Karla..

vesna*

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
consciousness needs to evolve more to restructure the world ...

your haiku poem has a strong and important message ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
A powerful, heart breaking write Karla!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Great message.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
www.DEC.com

We can make a difference, just got to put the money in the babes mouths.

Americas had the dust bowl. We gotta help the third world, as well as the developed world.

But what a crazy world, some die on purpose, whilst others strive to live.

TY special K..

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
You are right on every point. The thing is it has been going on for God only knows how long. In my lifetime the world--with America leading--has pumped billions of $$$ into the beleagured land and noting has changed except making the Swiss bank accounts of the insidious despots which rule them fat beyond belief. So rant on, but look to where you rant.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Your compassion shines again, Karla - and mankind's inhumanity towards our less fortunate bretheren really comes into sharp focus here.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Karla your compassion shows in this fine write and I agree it is the ignorant that allow it to continue. But not the ignorant of the world, but the ignorant in their own country. They have allowed war lords and tyrants to keep the billions of dollars in aide this country and others have given. Until people like Alex realize the true problem, like Abdi Noor does,and Bono the entertainer who knows it well, and has praised Bush and America for what it has done in African nations. It will never get solved, because bad rhetoric like those who only care to demean our country and its leaders, help the tyrants! Thanks for the opportunity to have my say;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
A haunting image
Well done and God bless you, Karla

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Karla
Sad Picture and subject
But your writing is excellent
WellPenned

William ........Love & Peace

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Dear Karla,

How could anyone not be moved by such a powerful write. The misery is heartbreaking. I agree totally with Alexandre Arnau.

warm hugs and love
Elga

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Powerful but true write my friend.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
This is so powerful Karla!!

Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 3, 2005
Karla,
I have been away for some time, but I just want to let you know that I am just amazed at how your poetry has evolved! You have talent, girl!
Kerry

Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
"and a nation starves
under the observing eyes
of the ignorant."

yes, our eyes. while we're busy "defending freedom" in iraq, and waging a "war on terrorism" all over the world, we forget those who really do need us. we turn a blind eye to the suffering in africa, while stomping our feet all over those who want nothing to do with us. here's an idea: let michael jackson and any other bored popstar who wants to record an album for iraq, while our government actually does something meaningful for the children of africa, honoring the birthplace of us all.
i'm glad someone here wrote this; i'm glad i'm not the only one angry over it.

Reviewed on August 3, 2005
(((Karla)))

When are people going to step up and start helping those who are TRULY in need?? Heartwrenchingly, no holds barred, sock it in your face write, one that is sorely needed!

God bless those poor people in Niger and in Africa; God be with them...Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <


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