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Perfection
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Another septcouplet. I am in loooooove.

And I have Jerry to thank. Smoooooch! :)


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perfection does not exist
in poetry
when broken pens
disguised as
poets
spill ink all over the page

another mess
tears coalesce

they feel like charlie brown
does when lucy
jerks the football away
at the
critical moment of
contact

resounding thwack
flat on their back

the garbage can overflows
with scribbled
attempts
visa card maxed out
from weekly trips
to the psychiatrist's couch *five cents*

they're gonna snap
from writing crap

suddenly in a moment
of divine inspiration
the words come
in an overwhelming flood
that breaches the
levee that is writer's block

and the words come
poems are fun

poets is the craziest people
but they don't mind
it keeps them
from going
totally stark raving
insane

i'm one of them
penning poems

a creature of the night
of habit
this is something
i must do
find the perfection
that  !! IS !!  poetry

poems await
words to create

they are mine, these words
stamped with the
good housekeeping seal
of MY approval
nothing else
matters to me

these words of mine
love them ... BIG time

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

 

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 Reviews of "Perfection"
Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
It made my world bright and round. I don't need much serious thought today. It's a long story. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
And I love your words big-time too, Karla! I really enjoyed this one.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
Well done Karla!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
Splendid words, Oh passionate poet! You always delight and inspire us all!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
Nice one SS. So chipper too, and you spelt my name right in the title..

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
You AREEEEEE in love, Karla!! Obsessed BIG TIME, like wot I am... but as long as we're happy, guess that's just OK, then... and at least it's reasonably harmless... I think??!! Bad for no-one's health but our own?? And you done penned it so right... last night I came on "briefly", thinkin I was NEVER gonna pen another line of poetry EVER again... then read Aberjhani and BINGO!! Crazy or wot?? Gotta love it! TY Kate xx. PS Daddy in my prayers! xx

Reviewed on February 8, 2006
Oh Karla, I loved this, you are so right, this is perfect!

Reindeer

Reviewed on February 8, 2006
You never sieze to amaze, wonderful done,
lots of love and many hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
Absolutely spot on as you say from time to time. Great depth here.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
Karla this is poetic wonderful!!!!!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Cute and light poem, airy as a dream with a smile on it's face.

Felix

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
And they are good words, too.

Another good one.

Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Very nice!

Reviewed on February 7, 2006
(((Karla)))

Your poetic prowiness has really taken a new direction (especially these septcouplets); and I am in awe of your talent. If there ever was an "American Idol" for poetry, you'd be the one I'd pick! :) So, on that note, "I am gonna' say yes!" *grins* Very well done; BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Your poetic skills continue to amaze Karla, and the resurgence in your creative abiliies continues apace !
The septcouplet format has acted as a catalyst for you in discovering your calling as a poet !
You have found your natural stride in writing, and the words are just pouring out of you with spontaneity and aplomb !
Peter


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