The sun is born, lives, and dies every single day, but it's a survivor.
~~~~ The sun is deceptive; slow to awaken. It takes its sweet time to crawl to noontime strength. ~ Young, it ages as it limps toward its end. It will not die easily; dusk shrouds its face. ~ And the night wins again, temporarily. The morn promises new hope, bright beginnings. ~~~~ (c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
I like this unique view of the "weakness" of the sun, Karla. It's very resiliance does, indeed, speak of hope springing eternal. Beautiful poetics here. TY Kate xx
The Million Member Sun Club. Buy ten acres for sun. Use seven acres for parking. On three acres, plant a new garden, sow some seeds for New Hope, reap Bright Beginnings, Karla!
Well done, Karla. A fine rendition. It reminded me of the Eqyption God Ra, who died each night to be reborn to Isis each day. Thankfully God gave us a sun and a Son that would last forever.
I love how you describe the life cycle of the sun; outstanding write! Very well done, and the picture is STUNNING! A perfect accompaniment to your beautiful poem; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
New beginnings are always exciting and a challenge
The sun, that great light in the sky, moves our seasons in cycles, that leads to the birth and regeneration of life and warmth on our planet
This is a great metaphorical write that signals transformation and change on a grand scale Karla
Love
Peter
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I love how you describe the life cycle of the sun; outstanding write! Very well done, and the picture is STUNNING! A perfect accompaniment to your beautiful poem; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
The sun, that great light in the sky, moves our seasons in cycles, that leads to the birth and regeneration of life and warmth on our planet
This is a great metaphorical write that signals transformation and change on a grand scale Karla
Love
Peter