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All's Forgiven
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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For Mama T., my best friend.


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a great weight seizes her in clutching fingers
and throws her down
in agony:
gravid with absolute concentration, she
s q e e z e s life from
between her thighs:
strangers who've always known each other regard
the other with
understanding eyes:
after months of taking from her everything
that she had, the
proof's in her arms:
all's forgiven as she holds him to her breast ...
welcome to the
world, little one.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.



 

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 Reviews of "All's Forgiven"
Reviewed on March 18, 2006
Excellent offering, I would love to share this with my frend Fran who just had a baby boy with your permission of course
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 17, 2006
Beautiful offering Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
a beautiful poem to the arrival of motherhood ...

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
How very beautiful Karla. You've captured the early moments of Motherhood so very well! And the photo is gorgeous too. Bravo! Michelle

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
From three shades of red and purple pain to the pale bloom of absolute love and joy. Yes, it was all worth it--the nausea, backaches, numbness & tingling in the extremities, toxemia, hemmoroids, headaches, swollen feet and two weeks of Braxton-Hicks
pre-labor pains and 12 hours of real labor, lol! Birth is never easy, in any life or endeavor, but what a reward. Both my babies were truly miracles. Absolutely beautiful write and pic, Karla!

Lin

Reviewed on March 16, 2006
Beautiful write, Karla; very nice! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
Oustanding write, this is an exceptional piece Karla, one you should be so proud of, capturing motherhood and birth in such a visual format. Well done sincerly.

Felix

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
Literary Gestation, Karla!

Sage

Reviewed on March 16, 2006
Adorable!!! Thanks Karla, you've made us smile!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
I am glad I didn't miss this one. Beautiful! just beautiful!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
I have never, NEVER had it put to me in just his manner. You reached the pulse here, Karla. Damn good.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
So true I never heard my wife complain about the pain of child birth.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
Karla this is a glorious poem, one of your best, the insight is so special! It will deeply move every mother especially! Brava!

Eileen

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
You're so right! The moment that baby is in our arms, we don't even remember being pregnant. Yes babies are a healing miracle. And then the're four and six and twelve and twenty, and we still forgive them. There is no other bond like that of a mother and child.

Carmen

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
Beautiful..And life is such a miracle...

love joanne

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
strangers who've always known each other regard
the other with
understanding eyes:

What a marvelous description, and what a marvelous poem, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
Karla
This is a sensational composition, comprising five parts, subtlely broken up by Jerry's famous semi colons...lols
The joys and agonies of motherhood epitomised very cleverly !
Peter

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 16, 2006
After nine months of sometimes insanity, sometimes pleasure, sometimes depression it all comes down to that one moment when the kid pops out and has NOT got horns or a tail...he is normal, but wait till he gets into his teens...;) Ed


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