Sijo: Take A Chance (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on April 9, 2006

Like this very much, thanks for sharing!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Splendid Karla, I hope to try this one myself
lover and peace, Carole

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Excellent Karla, Jerry is a good teacher, but you are an A student!

Eileen

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Enjoyed the sudden rhythmic snap and straight-up bold logic of these inspiring lines. The cat and mouse graphic is cool too:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

This something new to me, Karla. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Excellent, Karla!! So much said in so few words!!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Nice ku, Karla! Glad you took a chance. The graphic is awesome!

Sage

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Well done, Karla. And thank you for the introduction to an appealing verse form. I like the subject matter, seeming to fit the style somehow. And, I dunno... makes me giddy just watching the visual, so reckon the mouse has only to keep runnin and the cat will keel over in a dead faint!! :)) Love it, TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Wow, you did a fantastic job on this. Excellent.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Wish I had your abilities . the write...ed

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Well very good work on first attempt I must say

Felix

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Great picture with descriptive prose Karla.

Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Karla
This intriguing sijo may very well take off...:)
Keep dancing around that cat, and confuse him...lols
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

:)....love it!!

Sometime we got to take our chances huh??

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Gotta say you got what it takes to try different forms, and in this case, your first foray into the world of Sijo is, as you like to say, spot on

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 6, 2006

Karla~

"I am so dizzy, my head is spinnin'~" LOL

Interesting form of poetry, and I LOVE the animated graphic; too funny! LOL Much wisdom in succinct verse! Very well done; you've upped the bar on your talent yet again! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D