Hestitant fingers of light read the brailled surface of the sky, bumping over the clouds. They like what was said and so, the sun rises, bringing light to us all.
Feels good! Splendid write,
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
My favorite part of this is the first two lines because I immediately tried to figure out what the sky was saying in braille and that's brilliant, because i am sure most readers will feel that way- it draws you in and does it in a small space, great work.
This is a brilliant analogy to describing the start of the day, Karla! A blind person could really understand the beauty of a sunrise with your words, here. Excellent poetic visual imagery to go with the pic!
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love and peace, Carole
God Bless
Michelle!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger
Sage
Absolutely brilliant!!
Love Tinka
Regis
felix
You light up the Den this afternoon with this unrivalled and magnetic pen !
Complete with wondrous graphic
Love and Peace
Peter
Sheer brilliance in your profound, beautiful write! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. ;D