H.E.A.T. (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 12, 2006

Geez, you got that right. My AC has been running full tilt for two days. Dawn

Reviewed on July 12, 2006

Think about winter and how cold it can get.....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 11, 2006

Karla, get out those old-fashioned Ladie's Fans, like they had at the Tent-Meeting Revivals, back in the day! Those worked!

Or [grin], maybe they just................fanned the Fire!

This is adorable, though.......get a big straw hat!

love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

I wonder the same myself, over a hundred here in Jamestown California, and yes we had the air conditioner going LOL
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Not alternating current..Air con? Well here we don't have it.
We just pray for it to end...

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Karla

Have a nice cool lemon popsicle and lay back and enjoy it...;)

Love

Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

When I was a kid, we never had A.C., and we survived just fine. We are all extremely spoiled these days!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Interesting twist of poem and form on a hot subject. Well done my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

101 here in AZ at 10AM.
Tell me about it.

ROFL

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Ha ha..yep, its 105 here, Loved this Karla!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

sounds pretty darn hot! excellent imagery, Karla!

Susan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

We sweated and cussed a lot.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Melt'n like butt'r to the as..fault...I can hear that Texas twang!! Siper animation.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Wow! please don't melt all the way keep that pen hand out so we don't miss your poetry!;-) Love your creativity!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

It honestly takes a Southerner to appreciate the impact of the opressive heat and humidity...sizzling skin and the wilt. This brought to mind one day a while back when the little girl next door knocked at mine pleading in her child-like lilt (hand to forehead), "Miss Taylor, Miss Taylor...I have to come inside "cause I'm...(slight gasp) "suh-wet-n"! I love a poem that makes me remember.
Taylor

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 10, 2006

Mebbe you need to move to Alaska...just a thought~ *grins*

Hot out there?? Sounds like it! Good write of the heat that is summertime in Texas; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D