Miscarriage (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

Wow Karla you are on a roll
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Par excellence!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Karla:

Very compelling. "heartbeat stalled", no dawn for Aurora. Sad Sad Sad.

Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

I feel much pain, agony and heartache, yet compassion for the unborn.
Thank you!

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

I have missed my carriage a great number of times...;) E

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

WOW!!! I hope it wins Karla, it is perfection!You really are cooking!

Love,

Eileen

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Excellent imagery! You probably would like won. I'm sure there are many regretting the decision that they had to face it over and over again.
Vivid!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Excellent job on the reflections of this superb imagery! I had this unfortunate mishap occur to me seven times and with each one, I lost a part of me along with it ...Sad times...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
P.S. Hope you and yours had a Blessed Easter! So glad to be back reading and writing!:)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Penetrating and intense, Karla. Very vivid and the agony is apparent in your stark and striking lines. Immediate like the sharpness of the black and white picture. Unique interpretation and a keenly felt write. Let us know how you get on! :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Oh Karla,

Your impeccable ability to immediately draw the power of truth from every situation, does justice to this extremely agonizing experience.

I pray it wins; you are deserving.
God bless you, Sister.
Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Excellent write... so painful to bare... yet you did this grace.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Fantastic take on this photo. Wouldn't be surprised to hear you win :-)

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Wow, very vivid. What a stunning photo too.
Rebecca

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

This is one hell of a powerful and awesome write that captures the image as portrayed and turns it into the agonizing sadness of which you speak. Very emotionally draining to write I imagine.

Fee

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

excellent writing and what an interpretation of the image, Karla! best, Dawn

Reviewed by Gloria Gay

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Breathtaking.

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Excellent job Karla! Hope you win.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Excellent interpretation of the picture; you did a bang up job here, Karla! BRAVA, hope you win! All the best to you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

That ending...WOW!!!!

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

"Miscarriage"
Whew this surely sounds like a winner to me!!
TOTALLY AWESOME powerful write girl...you out done yourself with this!

Blessings to you We think you are a WINNER here at AD already!
Go Karla, Go Karla!!!

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on April 9, 2007

Shrewd insight and interpretation of this image. Brava Karla!

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