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No Grip
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Not my current state, just my Muse wanting to express herself ...


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Depression:  the long blue
slide down uncaring walls
into the shadows, where
I've grown accustomed to
the darkness - no one can
see the tears on my face ...


(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (10/11)

 

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 Reviews of "No Grip"
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
We must fight hiding tears. We need them to be seen. Cheers

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
A powerful write indeed...well expressed my friend! Bravo!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
powerful emotions are expressed here-have been there too and am sure most can relate

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
It's called the blues for a reason. It comes and we collapse. Pull out!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Dear Karla,

Your poem is a good expression of what being depressed feels like. Glad to hear that you're not in that place right now.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Love That Picture Karla
get home sick for my Catskill Mountains
specially at this time of the year,
when the Mountain turn into a kaleidoscope
Of beautiful hues
enjoyed your Well Penned write.

Peace and love be with you
William

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Beautifully written Karla...so glad it is not how you feel.
Great picture
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Singing the Blues,,,, that eery yet peacful tone, where only you can feel your feelings.
Take care always,, Christine

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
so greatly expressed and the photo is so beautiful

Larry

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Take you Muse out for some ice cream - it always helps with blue tears.

Kathy

Reviewed on October 12, 2007
WOW (woman of words)I too am glad this isn't your present state of mind but oh so descriptive of the feelings of kindred souls. PLB&G, luvya <Mikii>

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Although glad this isn't your state of mind I know that it is part of your soul and many of us poets feel this way from time to time. Great capture regardless.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Blue tears? having you a smoke with our Rufuz's Ed?
Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Very glad to hear it's not your current state, Karla, and I like that picture.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Here's one for ya Karla.

Standing here 'tween sand and surf,
I'm as blue as a ...Smurf.
LOL

Walt

Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Depression: not a fun place to be; glad you aren't there. Just keep on smiling and hoping that things will turn around; that's what I try to do (although there are THOSE days where I wonder about that...)! Very well written, Karla; and I LOVE the picture; spectacular! Captures the "blueness" of depression perfectly! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Love the differently colored fonts; neat! :)

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Don't be blue Karla. Depression will pass, and we love you and enjoy your wonderful words and pictures. Keep them coming...Hugs...Joyce

Reviewed on October 11, 2007
Depression is a slippery slope I am glad this is not your current state
God Bless
Michelle~


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