Maybe Then ... (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 19, 2007

powerful

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Believe me, a total unhinging would be worse....
Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

My thoughts and positive energy that I have left go out to you in hopes your pain will subside.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

oh - Karla, elegantly put -the total unhinging is a brilliant image -it should be the total unhinging of angriness of voice, a collective voice - the state of health care in Britain is a bit of a sore point with me - and that was my biggest british bit of understatement this year - makes me angry *dons Hulketta suit and snarls* - would shouting at the doctors help? Or asking again and again nicely for proper care and attention? I hope you feel well soon and often, best wishes from Hulketta and me, Nicky x

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

I could feel your pain through these words, I will be praying for you
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

Terrible to have such pain. Sometimes it's hard to know which pain is stronger in the body! Cheers and may God bless

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

I ask that a lot too, as I'm sure many do, and we just have to bear it as He did and know it will pass and one day He'll perfect us too!
I pray it is relieved soon!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

wish you well and it is a good thing to write about the things that torment us.

always,
randy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

I could feel the agony in this one!!

Hope you feel better soon !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

a well composed poem that re-enforces your words, i do hope that you get some relief

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

Your breaking up of the words, and squishing them together works! I hurt just reading it. Hope some day some medication works. --Charlie

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

Not sure why but I hope you feel better Karla. :)

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

i am so sorry that you are in so much pain. you and your sister are in my prayers.
i think that the idea of an 'unhinging' within this poem was brilliant, karla...really, brilliant!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

Karla, Sometimes we have to live with what this life has dealt us. The only thing we can do is make our pain as comfortable as possible.
I shall send you more healing energy. You have a beautiful day.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

Sometimes there is beauty through pain--the beauty of your words, the beauty of your ability to express the pain in such a way that your readers are moved to care, to pray for you, to ask the questions you ask, to "feel" your suffering, to understand in some small way what you are enduring--and to love you.

Sincerely,
Connie

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

The voice of pain and longing is in your poem and those of us who have suffered similarly know the depth of your words.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

why should a
body have to suffer like this?!?

A damned good question, and I hope you get some relief soon.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

*OW* This one made ME hurt! You describe the agonies of back pain perfectly in this one! Sorry you are in pain; hope you get the needed relief soon! Very well (and painfully) penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 17, 2007

At times I think the suffering we endure in our bodies is hell here on earth. Pills,pain management...it all is in the hands of medical "gurus" who are pushing meds that the pharmecuticals reps "encouage" docs to prescribe. Are they the best meds. I go to a nature place and buy TheraNeem or Neem
. It's a miracle herb that is working . Look it up.
Love,
Susan