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My)Graine
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Sound seen and felt ...

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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Lightning scrawls across vision
turned in.out.side; thunder
pulses red behind the eyes:
sound seen and felt.  Only the
darkness helps, soothing comfort
stilling the storm in my head ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/17)
 

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 Reviews of "My)Graine"
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
Dear Karla, I get your lovely poem, I wish we didn't have to talk about it. Everyone since his birth carries with him something different which gives pain and/or diconfort, we have to cope with, and those who manage to cope, will understand the various forces in us which try to deviate us from our path. God bless and you will emerge victorious. Emile

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
I feel your pain, Karla, literally. I have been suffering with migraines for about 12 yrs. now. It is truly a storm inside the head. Wonderful to read you again!

Reviewed by Glen Schulz
Reviewed on January 28, 2008
What a terrible way to spend a day of our lives, in such pain. I hope you never have to endure another one of them Karla. As we get older we realize how numbered our days are, and how much we should enjoy and savor each one. I hope you will!
*Glen*

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
Ah... how well I know that pain! Hope you are over it now...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Oh, Karla, they sound so horrible. My daughter Sue gets them, too. So sorry you have to endure them.

Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Never did experience one, thank GOD!
Love + feel better!
Becca~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I see that in your world the shadows never get a hold, lightning will se to that, like Grabriel's sword fencing with the Reaper.
Georg

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Karla, I know what you are saying as I too suffer with those, hope it goes away real soon.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Great comparisons. Hope your headache went away.........M

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Karla,

Know what ya mean my friend. Peace, Love, Prayers and Blessings, Paul.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Hope you're feeling better soon, Karla!

Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I can relate, I had one yesterday not fun
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
The picture matches your words p e r f e c t l y! I hope you're feeling better. Migraines are incapacitating, from what I hear.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Awwww, surely those migraines are no fun, I know, get them all the time lately. Please be well and take good care.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
love your play on words(title) excellent combo Karla you have a myriad of these, enough for a booK! Kudo's!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
I hope you are feeling much better now.

Loveya,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
not fun,,,May the storm subside,,,
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Hope you are feeling well now Karla. Beautiful picture. Well done...Joyce

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
A wild ride and picture. Believe me, I know
how you feel - I have had migraines since I was
14 years old and having the lesion in the brainstem also.
Keep cool.
Beckers (Becca) Lang

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
so sorry--get better soon--good write and matching picture

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
powerful and vivid electric headache -storm-spun style - photo is amazing!

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Karla, this photo describes this poem to the hilt...sometimes my head feels this very same way. A nice write.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
I have to agree with Ed on this one Karla. Beautiful though it is. give me a break, ninga.......get your head out of the weather and give us some of you innermost thoughts. It's time.

Walt

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
excellent write outstanding picture
peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Powerful capture of feelings...thanks.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
I have heard migraines are a bear to live with...vivid piece Karla

love, Carole~

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Karla, do I know how you feel? You bet! I've had migraines since I was about 12 years old. Thankfully, they only come once in a while now, but years ago, very frequently.

Peace and pain free to you.
Dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Quit your whinin', be a man, lady...LOL, ed

Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Karla~

*WOWCH!!* You have conveyed the pain of (my)graine effectively and powerfully! This made ME hurt! Hope you feel better soon! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Pic fits the mood of the poem splendidly!

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Oh boy, you described my migraines to a tea...well done my friend, Love Bonnie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Karla,

This is a strong and poetic comparison which can help those who do not suffer from this affliction to understand how it feels. Great write! Hugs:)
Sheila


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