Please do yourself a favor and read Anessa Blaine's words. I am undone by the power of her pen ...
Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman
steel liquifies under intense heat. words, burning hot: my eyes melt, roll down cheeks, wet with tears - i am undone by the scarcity of verse baring the soul for all to see ... your wonder.Ness.
Right! While the rest of us are taking from nature and writing to apease our poetic muses, she's pulling apart her sticky-bun words and feeding the world... --Charlie
Beautiful write, I will have to check her out
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
(blushes)
i am profoundly touched and was completely surprised! i saw the title and clicked merely for the fact that [ness] was in it..... {supposing we're all a bit narcissistic, and i thought 'hey look; i am in the title :^) }
but this. ...
again, i am so moved by the words and the emotions; the colours and the spirit of compassion, comradery, and hope that those tears were in a good and cleansing manner. ..
you are a beautiful, graced soul;
and no words can suffice a thank you; only i will tuck it into corners of my heart for the times when i think no one hears me.
wow; i am stilled. ..and beaming...
you ahve graced me truly~
THANKS!
anessa
well I am so lucky to be the first in line here,you have did her a fine tribute(love tributes when they are still alive)I think ness is a masterpiece just walking down the street,,yes Karla I think reading ness forces us to raise the bar for ourselves,
You have also done fine job of nessism here short and .......
she can be so many words,,,not often sweet...for to bare you soul
is often painfull,and aand Karla you have her essence here good work,
stan
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
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Thanks for yours here too...all purpled up and everything!
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Michelle~
i am profoundly touched and was completely surprised! i saw the title and clicked merely for the fact that [ness] was in it..... {supposing we're all a bit narcissistic, and i thought 'hey look; i am in the title :^) }
but this. ...
again, i am so moved by the words and the emotions; the colours and the spirit of compassion, comradery, and hope that those tears were in a good and cleansing manner. ..
you are a beautiful, graced soul;
and no words can suffice a thank you; only i will tuck it into corners of my heart for the times when i think no one hears me.
wow; i am stilled. ..and beaming...
you ahve graced me truly~
THANKS!
anessa
I usually don't read Anessa, but your words prompt me to want to. I shall check her words out, see a true artist at work. Very well penned; brava!
Love the picture! Beautiful!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
You have also done fine job of nessism here short and .......
she can be so many words,,,not often sweet...for to bare you soul
is often painfull,and aand Karla you have her essence here good work,
stan