A fall drops slowly, tracing its way down cheeks determined not to let it join its brothers. I fail to save it as it jumps from my eyes, a suicidal leap into the abyss. Others push their way to the surface - lemmings clinging to the cliffs my lashes have become: made easier by the first brave one, they let go, drown in the seas gathering at my feet ...
Excellant write Karla, this is absoulutely one of soul aching quality and I can honestly say I enjoyed this more than any other write you have done. Fresh and new,even if a bit poignant...it is lovely.
hugs
Fee
This is quite different for you Sis. . . very soothing words that make up one of the most philosophical poems I've ever seen here. Sharp! You go girl!
blessin's and (((HUGS)))
cynth'ya
In a post-coup America, an Illinois farm boy is drawn into the resistance by his brother's death. Captured, he is given a choice: betray his friends, or the girl he loves will be lobotomized.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
And found this gem.
Its a keeper.
Well done.
--RaeLynn
love, Carole~
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
hugs
Fee
Georg
so is that great clear beach piture
You poste it to accompany its excellence
Love & Peace be with you
William
open, and full
glorious thing youve conjoured
ness
stunning poem
I love the emerging complexity and scope of your work
good write
h & s
john+
blessin's and (((HUGS)))
cynth'ya
Blessing to you karla dear!
love,
Susan
Cryssa
Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinkles, Karen Lynn. :D
God Bless
Michelle~
Peace,
Dan
this is great Karla...
John
Loved it,
Becca~