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W.Righting A Wrong
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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To all who've served, thank you. I will remember.

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If I could w.right the wrongs of
an apathetic nation,
I would - but there's only a
few willing to remember

the terrible cost you paid
for my freedom.  It's listed,
name by name on a granite
Wall - fifty eight thousand, plus:

men and eight women who will
never grow older than the
day they died:  frozen in time.
That's just from Vietnam:  what

about those from World War One,
Two, Korea?  Granada,
Faulklands?  Desert Storm and the
current Iraq and Afghan

wars?  Too many, too many:
and those that survived wonder
if the sacrifice they made
was worth it.  To me, it was.

Thank you.  Even if no one
thinks so, it matters to me ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/3)

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 Reviews of "W.Righting A Wrong"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 6, 2008
Amen. A wonderful tribute. Liz

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 5, 2008
A fine tribute to our vets . Your words are quite moving......M

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
From the bottom of a proud military brat's heart, thank you for your eloquence.

Rebecca

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
Thought provoking write. Thanks for helping us all remember...
Cryssa

Reviewed on February 4, 2008
KARLA .... I SALUTE YOU ... AND ALL OF THEM THAT PRECEDED US.

I don't remember the exact sorce, or number, but I think it was the soldier's Code of Conduct, and may have been the last item in the list:

"to salute all colors and standards not cased." I well remember stopping on the military base, and saluting the red flag on a General's CAR - even though he was NOT in it ---
YET - the selfish FOOLS who sent our brave warriors out FAIL to salute the returning VALIANT VETS ... well, at least unless a TV camera crew is around - good PR, don'cha know?

SEMPER FI ... TOM

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
The only genuine thanks a soldier will get is from another soldier whose life was spared by his sacrifice.
SEMPER FI

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
As it does to me. If only our leaders felt the same today, the plight of our valiant vets would be much better.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 4, 2008
...a tribute of heart is penned...and remembered.
Thank you Karla...
John

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
A very touching and beautiful tribute, Karla!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Hats off, and a moment of silence... ... ... ... Let Freedom Ring! --Charlie

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
... and to me, too!
Thanks Karla!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Such a touching and profound write my dear friend...written from the heart of a truly caring person! Heartfelt and well written...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
A wonderful person you are, all of us who were thank you immensely...e

Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Thank you for sharing a great write, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
I think it matters to a lot, most people respect and love the service man who follow orders unquestionably which is their job. Our job though as the people who elect the representatives who decide where our young servicemen and women will fight, do not let them die for cause that is in vain or has no bearing on anything except monetary gain.

Fee

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
An awesome heartfelt write, blessings, holly

Reviewed on February 3, 2008
We need to start thanking our lucky stars for each and every veteran (living and those who died, either in battle or in time of peace) that gave their lives for the freedoms that we enjoy. We also ought to start giving them the benefits that they (rigthfully) deserve instead of treating them like a piece of crap. As the daughter/sister/niece/cousin of military personnel it'd be stupid for me not to remember the sacrifices made by our veterans!! God bless our military might; and thank YOU for YOUR service in the Air Force; it was NOT in vain!!

Powerful remeinder, Karla; thank you!!

(((HUGS))) And much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :) *SALUTE*

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Well said. A Sacriifce that continues by the birth of each new child in the arms of liberty.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
You really show your true colors and love for your fellow man in this pen...soulful...
I Thank You TOO!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Most beautiful tribute Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Oh they are my friend. That old saying "I have but one life to give to my country" I would do in a minute and you would too. Great poem. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
A beautiful tribute Karla. thank you for remembering and sharing with us.

Nwfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
I care that it matters to you ~ evol~Ted

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 3, 2008
Awesome tribute to those who fought and gave their lives for our freedom. May they live in our memories for their dedication to you, me and our country.

God bless you. Kathy


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